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Evergreen & Willow Wishes |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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Evergreen & Willow Wishes The scene is perfect... Evergreen covered in a blanket of natures glory surround the frozen waters, which circle their special place beneath the weeping shade Two lovers with glowing cheeks and sparkling eyes hold hands as they skate on a looking glass made of their arctic tears, where they had shed their pasts to become one. Ice crystals hanging from the willow add their prism of color to the evening. And the winds of West fill the night with its music. Luna smiles then blushes as she hides her eyes away from the passion below. A small fire off to the side, where he'll guide her to warm her hands between his own, and entwined fingers will trace the new gold that consummates the bond. Yes, it's a beautiful scene, for a Christmas card. One that I hold my pen above, and sign it with my tears. Snow 12/7/00 < !signature--> "...I am a river in winter, quiet in the eyes of most but deep, swift and full of life to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice." snow [This message has been edited by Snow (edited 12-07-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful poetry Snow...I like that twist at the end gives the reader lots of room to imagine what happened...but as I said beautiful love scene painted with great lines!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is beautiful in it's simplicity, I love nature, and this is seasonal and lovely! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Snow~ This piece is jam-packed with imagery ! I could almost hear the wind chime of the ice crystals on the willow - blown gently by the winds of passion. Very nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Thank you all very much. I value each and everyone of your comments. Snow "...I am a river in winter, quiet in the eyes of most but deep, swift and full of life to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Snow- wow...this is absolutely beautiful!  i just love the imagery...incredible.. wonderful write.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
vicky.. thank you ! it's always great to see your thoughts. snow "...I am a river in winter, quiet in the eyes of most but deep, swift and full of life to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice. |
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