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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2000-12-07 02:32 AM


Warm Thoughts...for You

Past Two in the morning
warmth is my night
Still dressed in my whole
from the bed as I light
and wonder what happened,
as my eyes opened wide.
I KNow!! I have dreamed
finally, heat has arrived.

I came to the first floor
to turn out the lights
but first, must I check here
to be sure all is right?
And of course I have missed you
by hours it seems...
But I did hold you nicely,
if only in dreams...

~Wynter



"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


© Copyright 2000 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-12-07 06:17 AM


Wonderful reflecting thoughts Wynter..this is put down beautifully!!   write on!!
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2000-12-07 02:22 PM


well I was a bit tired at 2  in the morning...I always surprise myself..*s

thanks E

~Wynter
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"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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Victoria
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3 posted 2000-12-07 02:49 PM


nice images you portray Wynter..hope you are warmer today and all is well..

                ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-12-07 02:54 PM


How beautiful your refections are.  Inspiration comes at the strangest of moments sometimes but you have taken it and penned a truely wonderful piece.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2000-12-07 08:14 PM


Evening nakdthoughts,

Lovely poem you have written, a little cool though. Hope that you have warmed up.

BC


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