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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-12-06 05:43 PM



Ride On The Back Of A Unicorn

Ride on the back of a unicorn, scatter dreams in the air
Let love flow like a golden river with joy enough to spare
Hear the angels sing and dance with such delightful glee
Lay your heart next to mine and let our spirits run free
It takes one glance from you and my blood starts to heat up
Just a simple touch has me drinking from passions cup
My world is coloured with the rainbows' beautiful hues
Your eyes ask for promises that my heart can't refuse

Grab hold of the rainbow, reach for the stars that shine
Let love surge like an ocean from within this heart of mine
Feel the flames of passion burning fiercely and so hot
What do you do that ties my stomach into such a knot
My breath becomes shallow and I'm blushing as I stammer
Whenever you are near me my heart pounds like a jackhammer
My thoughts make me blush to the very roots of my hair
Because just looking at you recalls the love we share

I'm flying into the stars, and playing ball with the moon
Let love live for she will be coming to see you very soon
Can't you hear her feet walking down your hearts street
I welcome you into loves sumptuous luxury hotel suite
There's everything you need to make your stay such a treat
Such a perfect setting for our hearts and souls to meet
Touching you, feeling you fills me with loves' sheer delight
Oh beloved love is that which clears our clouded sight


Marsha




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[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 12-07-2000).]

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Marsha~ Sweet Mushy Marsha   This is gorgeous!!!!! I'm putting this in my library..... Truly beautiful  -SEA
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Don't you get tired of writing all this good verse?

No?

Good! 'Cuz I don't get tired of reading it  


Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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3 posted 2000-12-07 06:58 AM


Circe, thank you so much love, and you're keeping it, I am honoured, I truly am. Thank you most kindly.
Take care
               Mushy
                  
Interloper, is it? I'll take your word for it, because I have no judgement at all where my scribbles are concerned. The only ones I ever like get no response at all. So Thank you loads
Take care
                Mushy Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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Marsha~
You are spilling the nicest thoughts across the pages -

'Your eyes ask for promises that my heart can't refuse'

I like that !
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 2000-12-07 07:29 AM


Mushy Marsha its great to read your wonderful words of love.....you are soaring high my friend.

((hugs))
Charisma


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6 posted 2000-12-07 06:54 PM


Marge, thank you truly, you know I'm always thankful to see your name on one of my posts, because I admire you soooooooo much. (I know, you know I do)
                         
Charisma, thank you, I am indeed,      
Thank you kindly.

Take care
                Mushy Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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7 posted 2000-12-07 11:23 PM


Very sweet and beautiful, Marsha!  The title drew me right away, for I love unicorns.  Well written!  

*Krista Knutson*

"One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar."
Helen Keller


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Marsha* This is beautiful and dreamy...loved
falling into this one.  Excellent weave of
your pen~

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9 posted 2000-12-08 12:02 PM


Marsha--this is so perfectly, romantically mushy...pardon me while I sigh....
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When you geet finished with him can I have my unicorn back? I wanna go on a ride like this.....SIGH
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Alwye, thank you most truly, I do really cherish each and every reply.
                      
BDC, thank you very very much, that does mean a lot to me.
                    
Martie, thank you, it's true I can't stay away from my mushy writes. I do try, but they seem to come out anyway.
                         
Paula love, of course you can sweet, he's a wonderful ride, he really is. Maybe we could share him, I'm very partial to stallions of his calibre. Breeding in every single inch.  
                  
Take care
                 Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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12 posted 2000-12-08 12:28 PM


Who was it that said that unicorns were all fantasy?  I think that they would correct themselves after reading this one.  Wonderful and uplifting verse from you my friend. Hugs to you.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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13 posted 2000-12-08 04:36 PM


Mark my friend, thank you truly, I'm a sucker for rainbows, stars and unicorns, I just can't resist them at all. Ever since I was little and read The Lion, The Witch And The Wardrobe, followed by the rest in the series. Thanks for the hugs love, after the last week I've had I could certainly do with them. In fact given the chance I'd erase the whole week.
Take care
                Mushy
                  
  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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14 posted 2000-12-08 05:19 PM


MArsha, this is great! I love uplifting poetry like this with such promise and optimism! Wonderful writing!!!

back of a unicorn...sound like fun. Forget riding on the head...that darned horn could do some serious damage!  

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15 posted 2000-12-10 06:07 AM


'Deer, thank you very muchly, I'm really pleased you like this. I do too, it's one of my favourites.
Take care
                 Mushy Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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16 posted 2000-12-10 06:11 AM


MM~
True to name sweet Mushy Marsha...this is very beautiful Marsha..well penned
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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17 posted 2000-12-10 06:08 PM


Tracie, thank you very muchly, you know I really appreciate it.  
Take care
              Mushy Marsha
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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