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Dennis L. White
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0 posted 2000-12-06 03:31 PM


Icy hand beckons

"Enjoy winters' pure beauty"

Crystal trap is set!


12-6-2000

© Copyright 2000 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2000-12-06 03:38 PM


Cold and wicked.........very good   -SEA
vlraynes
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2 posted 2000-12-06 08:20 PM



Dennis-
   wow...giving me chills with this one..
   wonderful, as usual..

   hugs,
   ~vicky




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3 posted 2000-12-06 08:58 PM


Yes, it is and soon it will be falling...

What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman



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4 posted 2000-12-07 01:25 PM


OUCH!i hope the snow isnt too distressing for you, dennis...well, make the best use out of it...will it comfort you if i say that i will gladly trade places with you now?


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5 posted 2000-12-07 01:47 PM


Beautiful imagery ... WELL DONE!


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6 posted 2000-12-07 04:22 PM


Nice haiku.  Cool way of showing that things are not always the way they seem!
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