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Wilfred Yeats
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0 posted 2000-12-06 03:09 PM



When I think how you've bewitched me
No slyness, no slight-of-hand
With poetic words that ply me
I wonder about playing warlock
Is it fair you hypnotize me?

I should have a doll from Haiti
I could kiss so tenderly
Wearing a lock of your hair
One I could love oh so free

Having read my poems you know
What I could do with that doll
Your eyes holding their soft glow
I’m imagining your smooth skin
Sweet I hear your voice just so
Leading us deep into sin

I know as much as I want you
All I'll do is dream of the day
When my strong arms will enfold you
Drive all your cares far away
Kiss tears off, tenderly hold you
In your ear love words softly say

No I won't be playing warlock
Bewitched as I am in my mind
Thinking of you round the clock
Close to you, you've made me bind
I see you wearing a silk frock
Round your fingers thus I do wind
I won’t be drinking of hemlock
Though to others you've made me blind

Just to you, your solid possession
My undying love pledged evermore
Just to you without any condition
But that doll could even the score


There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~Janet Mar

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-12-06 03:22 PM


~WY~
HOT!
"Sweet I hear your voice just so
Leading us deep into sin"

This is wonderful
I like.......

~SEA

Charisma
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2 posted 2000-12-06 05:33 PM


oh my..oh my...there is one lucky lady you hold in your arms.....
these was soooooooo lovely.  

Charisma

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2000-12-06 07:51 PM


Evening Wilfred,

Your writing is suberb, and pleasing to read. I did enjoy this one, yet I also enjoy all of the others that I can manage to get to. Very nicely done.

BC

Startime
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4 posted 2000-12-06 08:00 PM


*sigh* lucky woman indeed to have strong arms around her. This was beautifully written. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


Martie
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5 posted 2000-12-06 08:30 PM


Bill--A doll from Haiti makes me smile...and you a warlock...seems like you're more of a lovelock...for this poem is so tender and filled with love.
Irish Rose
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6 posted 2000-12-06 08:57 PM


Wilfred, right now I feel like Elizabeth Montgomery!

What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman



Paula Finn
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7 posted 2000-12-07 01:32 AM


Grinning from ear to ear...
Wilfred Yeats
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8 posted 2000-12-07 02:34 PM


I'm "online" but briefly - not as comfortable as I'd like to be - - so please let this blanket 'thank you' suffice - I do appreaciate all your kind responses.
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