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SEA
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0 posted 2000-12-06 12:46 PM



Your love came to me
as a complete surprise
all those nights alone
when I would fantasize-

of a man, just like you
with love so clear in his eyes
a need for me unyielding
unwilling to compromise-

or settle for anything less
than my satisfied sighs
my pleasured moans
my fulfilled cries-

from the love he gives me
there's no need to over analyze
look into my heart
and you'll realize-

He is my moon
to light my night skies
My morning sun
to warm me when I rise.

~SEA~

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Wesley the Blue
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1 posted 2000-12-06 12:50 PM


this is a wonderful poem.  A love like that is very special, and you describe it so wonderfully.

KM

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


Paula Finn
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2 posted 2000-12-06 12:55 PM


Beautifully written Sea...all the love just shining thru
Janet Marie
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3 posted 2000-12-06 12:59 PM


how lucky you are to have found that warmth in the morning Sea-girlie ...
its so rare when our fantasy love is realized
i envy you  
wonderful passionate writing
later-make-us-sigh-gator
jm

I looked into the sky for my anthem
The words and music came through
But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen
Looking into you

Tony Abbot
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4 posted 2000-12-06 01:02 PM


Very touching and passionately written.

'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot

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5 posted 2000-12-06 01:06 PM


Circe, I'm grinning and smiling like a Cheshire cat, I love this one as you knew I would. This is brimming over with love, gorgeous utterly wonderful and loving.  
Take care
              Mushy
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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6 posted 2000-12-06 01:11 PM


"My morning sun
to warm me when I rise"

What beautiful lines you have here, SEA.
Fairy tales can come true.....

Lady Lightning
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7 posted 2000-12-06 02:01 PM


Sea....how lovely..Lets all know that fairy tales and fantasies can come true...Loved it..all of it...

               ~LL~


The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Charisma
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8 posted 2000-12-06 03:14 PM


oh Sea wonderful poem...weaven with warmth and love....love it.

((hugs))
Charisma

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9 posted 2000-12-06 03:56 PM


Der Keit~   thank you

Paula~ glad you liked this  

Janet~ I got very lucky with my husband, he is my dream come true!  

Tony~ thank you so much  

Marsha~ you sweetie! thank you  

Balladeer~ it makes me feel so happy to see you in here, thank you for reading  

LL~   they can, and they do!! thanks  

Charisma~ thank you, glad you stopped in!  

-SEA

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10 posted 2000-12-06 05:02 PM


SEA
Good day,
Beautiful write.  I Like this muchly.

Poeminister

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O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
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11 posted 2000-12-06 06:05 PM


He is my moon
to light my night skies
My morning sun
to warm me when I rise.
======================================
Lucky guy.  Any kin to Sunshine  

Truly enjoyable!

More!


Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


SEA
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12 posted 2000-12-06 06:31 PM


PM~   thank you  

Interloper~ glad you enjoyed this  

-SEA

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13 posted 2000-12-06 06:50 PM


'of a man, just like you
with love so clear in his eyes
a need for me unyielding
unwilling to compromise'

Beautiful, SEA!  Isn't REAL love a great thing to experience??  Love this!!

sp  


'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me...

Butterflies_dont_cry
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14 posted 2000-12-06 07:12 PM


Sea* This is truly beautiful...glad to see that love like this lives in your heart~
Startime
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15 posted 2000-12-06 07:20 PM


*sigh* yes, this gives one hope that fantasies can come true. Wonderful. I am so happy to read of you love. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


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16 posted 2000-12-06 07:31 PM


Evening SEA,

I must say that you are absolutely awesome with your writings. Goodness, a romantic, I presume. You do write from the heart.

BC

SEA
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SP~ real true love is the BEST!!  

BDC~ thanks  

Startime~   thank you so much

BC~ Gosh,thanks! I am a huge romantic!  

-SEA

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18 posted 2000-12-06 09:25 PM


Sea...gorgeous poem, so full of love...it must be wonderful to have found it.
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19 posted 2000-12-06 09:31 PM


Sea you just poured wonderful love fantasies out on this screen I just read...wonderful writing....write on!
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20 posted 2000-12-06 09:53 PM



SEA, this is going in the book of my forevermore's...

An awesome write PoetFriend, you truly have captivated the reader with this endearing expression of love in your heart...

Muaaaaaaah on cheeks I adore it...

coco

Lone Wolf
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21 posted 2000-12-06 10:04 PM


SEA,

You have written of a love as pure and innocent as new fallen snow.  Simply beautiful.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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