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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-12-06 08:20 AM




Promises were kept
Sparkling white snow swept the land
Beauty blankets all




Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2000-12-06 08:25 AM


Kari, this is sooooooo beautiful that I am struck dumb. This is utterly incandescent, wonderful work love really superb. I love it yes I do.
Take care
              Majestic Marsha
                      

      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


Victoria
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2 posted 2000-12-06 08:33 AM


beautiful images Sunshine..so much said in these lovely haikus...

                  ~Victoria~

                


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Charisma
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3 posted 2000-12-06 09:30 AM


love this snowy promises...

((hugs))
Charisma

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4 posted 2000-12-06 10:01 AM


You have captured the beauty of snow when one is able to just view it from a perch inside a warm abode.  It can be so absolutely wonderful, until one or one's loved ones must travel distances in it.

Your poem is fantastically peaceful, lovely.

Mark Bohannan
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5 posted 2000-12-06 10:52 AM


Here is hoping that your snowy blanket never melts away.  At least not the beauty of it.  Lovely write my friend.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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ethome
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6 posted 2000-12-06 11:08 AM


Hey hey Sushine I like the sound of this... there is a real beauty there for sure..I don't know how long I want those promises to be kept but yes my dear poet lady you did a very nice job on this.....I don't know how you wrote it without it melting...you must have used the name Karilea when you signed on to write.....take care....ethome
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7 posted 2000-12-06 12:25 PM


on it's way my friend. . .  

wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Paula Finn
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8 posted 2000-12-06 01:09 PM


I read this even as the snow blankets the ground here...stunning Sunshine just stunning
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9 posted 2000-12-06 06:10 PM


The queen does it again!



Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


SEA
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10 posted 2000-12-06 06:18 PM


Ohhhhhhh I'm looking for that white stuff to land here for Christmas!!!! I hope I hope I hope   Enjoyed this   -SEA
Poeminister
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11 posted 2000-12-06 06:25 PM


Lovely haiku. Nicely done.  

Poeminister

Sunshine
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12 posted 2000-12-08 10:46 PM


Marsha, I believe you were struck smart...incandescent?...enjoy, enjoy...

Victoria...brevity is good...thank you...

Thank you Charisma...

Virginia, when loved ones travel in snow, I always hold my breath...

Mark, who knew snow could be warm...thank you...

Ethome, I enjoy the sound of your keys tapping responses to my offerings...it is I who thank you...

Sven, should be about 10 degrees here this weekend...thank you...

Paula, stunning times two...wow...thanks...

Interloper...just a servant, thank you Sir...

SEA...I'll send up a few requests...thank you!...

Thank you Poeminister...



Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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