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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
I Wonder I wonder, did you know, How much I needed you so? How feeling your touch late at night, Filled my heart with such delight? The warmth I felt when you were near, The love I felt when you were here. Filled my being with joy and peace, Gave my soul a sweet release. I wonder did you know, How much I needed you so? I never wanted to let you go, Although I did, you're gone...So? How it hurt, How hard it was, To watch you walk away from us. But having you here where you didn't belong, Would have been by far, much more wrong. I wonder Do you know, How much I Thought I needed you so? ~Lady Lightning~ < !signature--> The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown [This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 12-06-2000).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
LL, a heart tugger entree you have displayed on screen... Welcome to this family of PoetFriends and may I say this poem you write expressing a love of once a time I gotta tell ya I hear it's beat... Thank you for this read  coco |
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lisad Junior Member
since 2000-12-05
Posts 22 |
Lady Lightning, such beautiful words, and how true they are... I could feel your pain as I was reading.. Cant wait to read more... love ya, cupts |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Welcome to Passions LL! This is a wonderful entrance your weave holds so much emotion the reader can't help but feel this poem. Great writing and I look forward to more of your work in the future~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome Lady Lightning!!!! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome!! You are being very understanding in this poem...great expressions of a love that still fills your heart and mind!! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions...wonderful entrance, and I will look forwards to see more from you. Charisma |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How it hurt, How hard it was, To watch you walk away from us. But having you here where you didn't belong, Would have been by far, much more wrong. ================== Welcome to Passions Lady Lightning(cool name) you've made a lovely poetic entrance with this poem of unselfish love . Its very nice to have you here with us and I look forward to more of your poetry. take care jm I looked into the sky for my anthem The words and music came through But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen Looking into you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyLightning~ Welcome to Passions. Heart-rendered writing. I felt hope spring forth in your closing. Stand up and be *hugged* ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hey kiddo, bout time you posted one. Now that didn't take much egging on did it? This was a wonderful entrance to Passions and you show a lot of lady like style in the way you handle to situation and your thought processes in it. Wonderful write my friend. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
CoCo...Thank you for your kind words...Much appreciated... lisad...Wonder if you felt my pain cause you have seen my pain? Hmmm? LY..cupts.... Butterflies...Thank you so much, your words mean alot... Irish Rose...Thank you for the warm Welcome... ethome...Your words are much appreciated..But I do have to make a point here... Hope it's ok to make a point here...oops, if not... Charisma...Thank you for your words...Maybe more, I need much, much work... JM...Thanks so much..means alot to me to know you took the time to read my simple lines...It was scary, but fun ...Maybe I'll try it again...Who knows?...  Marge...Thanks for the "hug"..Here's one right back at ya...Hope has sprang forth..It always does...Without it, well, I think we all know..... Last but certainly not Least...Hey Cowboy,words from you mean so much as you know..Thanks for taking the time to read my work...My words are mere "scribbles" compared to the emotions I feel when I read your work and all the rest of the "Best" here...Thanks for the egging..Don't know if they'll be more but I will always be here to read and reply to all the "wonderful" people that I know are here pouring theirs hearts and souls out for all of us to enjoy... |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
CoCo...Thank you for your kind words...Much appreciated... lisad...Wonder if you felt my pain cause you have seen my pain? Hmmm? LY..cupts.... Butterflies...Thank you so much, your words mean alot... Irish Rose...Thank you for the warm Welcome... ethome...Your words are much appreciated..But I do have to make a point here... Hope it's ok to make a point here...oops, if not... Charisma...Thank you for your words...Maybe more, I need much, much work... JM...Thanks so much..means alot to me to know you took the time to read my simple lines...It was scary, but fun ...Maybe I'll try it again...Who knows?... Marge...Thanks for the "hug"..Here's one right back at ya...Hope has sprang forth..It always does...Without it, well, I think we all know..... Last but certainly not Least...Hey Cowboy,words from you mean so much as you know..Thanks for taking the time to read my work...My words are mere "scribbles" compared to the emotions I feel when I read your work and all the rest of the "Best" here...Thanks for the egging..Don't know if they'll be more but I will always be here to read and reply to all the "wonderful" people that I know are here pouring theirs hearts and souls out for all of us to enjoy... The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
this is a wonderful poem. it has a nice sentiment too it. It is better to love and lose than to live a loving lie Keith Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Oops..sorry all...didn't mean to send this thru twice...A "newbie" here taking up valuable space..  .  The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Der Keit...Thanks for your kind words...And yes, I must agree it is better to love and lose than to live a loving lie...How true... The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
and another new poet wields her pen at Passions... straightforward and to the point an unpretentious delivery of real -- um... anti-passion...? |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LL~ Welcome! This goes straight to the heart.........so many can relate.......I hope to see more from you -SEA |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
I like the ending, how you chose to put that reverse, of "how I thought I needed you.." Very good. Shows how we can overcome, can understand times we've had to let go. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Rebel-Letting go was the easy part, the hard part was staying for ten years. Thank you very much for your kind welcome. SEA-Thank you and I promise that you will see more as I am being forced to write these days.LOL Sorry, but I am a little shy about my poetry but getting more comfortable with the friendly people here. dragonpoe-The ending is my way of finding a bit of closure. Thank you very much. The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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