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Rat Maze - haiku
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Rat Maze - haiku |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Life is just a joke That we play upon ourselves Us rats in a maze KM |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
hey i like that ha.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
thanks, for how short they are, haiku's can say an awful lot Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wow......I guess that makes me a mouse, I don't participate in the maze..........  Enjoyed this  -SEA |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Made me stop and think. How truthful With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love it.... Charisma |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Thank you all. Just remember to laugh at the joke. KM Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LOL am laughing...arent we just...chasing after that elusive dream...the one THEY say we want |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Seem like rats in a maze sometimes...were you looking at your screen saver? I like the contrast from the first to the last....a good one!! |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Thank you all for replying. Paula: good for you, laughter is the best medecine ethome: nope, I wasnt looking at my screen saver, I was looking at my life. Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
often felt the same way...a thought-provoking one |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
OH so very true.... Thought provoking indeed. ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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