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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-12-05 11:39 PM


This is an old one from DP, written for someone else, but too appropriate for today. Slightly altered to protect the "innocent"

Goodbye, you say so easily
How fast I'm just a memory

A moments love, a tryst in time
And now you're on your path designed.

A backwards glance is all I get
Am I that easy to forget?

My love is sorely wasted now
You never meant a single vow...


© Copyright 2000 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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missouri
1 posted 2000-12-05 11:48 PM


Oh sweetie this just aches...hugs to you
Butterflies_dont_cry
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Michigan
2 posted 2000-12-06 12:01 PM



As is your way Sandra your weaves slice me
with a familiar edge, heart felt hugs to you
and the pain that this poem speaks so
eloquently of~

Charisma
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lost in blue pages
3 posted 2000-12-06 04:24 PM


heartfelt....glad that I have found this one too.

((warm hugs))
Charisma

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4 posted 2000-12-07 04:55 PM


Sandra...hugs for you, and my thoughts are with you. Sad poem, but voices the pain of lonliness all too well. Sigh...
Aimster
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5 posted 2000-12-08 11:02 AM


Sandra~

ouch! this one had some pain
traced in it most definitely. but an
awesome write nonetheless. take care
and *hugs* to you.
~amy~

SpitFire
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6 posted 2000-12-08 12:41 PM


~Hey Gurl! Holy ouch! This one says more to me than you'll ever know. From your you. *sigh*. Sending warmth S. Always. *Peace hun.
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
7 posted 2000-12-08 12:46 PM


Yeah, this one hurt alright.  Hugs to you my friend.  Your anguish is much felt in this one.  

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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