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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-12-05 09:55 PM



~Love's Bright Season~

Winter emptied snow covered hills sparkle in lonesome silence
soon redbirds skate on ice laced branches
a delightful sight to behold

Waltzing snowflakes dance to a Merry Christmas tune
as chimmney's puff messages in the wind
nipping at your thoughts this cold winter day

Hands folded in warm mittens reach for rosey cheek's
kisses planted on frozen lips soon warm from the sparks that fly
eye's twinkle at all the reasons why
love makes the season bright


BloomingRose



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-12-05 10:42 PM


Deb, this is so bright and so pretty...thank you for lifting my heart...

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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2 posted 2000-12-05 10:57 PM


BloomingRose~
Oh, my gosh - that's pretty !

'redbirds skate on ice laced branches
a delightful sight to behold'


I can just see it !  
What a delightful write from you, dear poet.
~*Marge*~



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Charisma
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3 posted 2000-12-06 04:31 PM


yes love make the seasons bright....even that cold winter...

love it.

Charisma

Victoria
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4 posted 2000-12-06 04:49 PM


very lovely Deb..enjoyed the beautiful images you painted..

                    ~Victoria~



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Poeminister
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5 posted 2000-12-06 05:10 PM


BloomingRose,
Excellent writing and imagery...nicely done..

Poeminister

BloomingRose
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6 posted 2000-12-07 09:03 AM


Sunshine~ Thank you  

Marge~ Thanks, I had a vision of birds determined to stay on those icy branches lol

Charisma~ Glad you like it, Thanks  

Victoria~ Thank you. I know from reading your poems, you too enjoy adding imagery to your writing

Poe~ Thank you kindly  


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