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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-12-05 08:28 PM




Come, get lost in the zodiac of the sky
amongst the moon, stars and the planets
love shining in the mansion of the night
two celestial bodies upon an imaginary sphere
nestled safe within the vault of heaven
safe within the constellation of your arms
let us make love within the universe
heavenly kisses between shooting stars
i your ~Venus~ and you my ~Apollo~
exploring the cosmos far beyond
each heavenly kiss a sign of love from me
within the moonlight above rising tides
until the third planet from the sun
arms of gravity steal you away from me


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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  





[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-06-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Victoria - All Rights Reserved
angelswing
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1 posted 2000-12-05 08:33 PM


Is that an invitation ? I'd love to, I've always woundered what space dust tastes like . It does feel kinda' heavenly doesn't it, the feeling of being needed, When it happens to me I always feel over the moon for sure . Great poem, I loved it .
Thanx .
L.of.L. Tom .


Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
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Sven
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2 posted 2000-12-05 08:49 PM


truly the stars shine a little brighter tonight my friend. . .



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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


ethome
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3 posted 2000-12-05 08:52 PM


Where do I sign up huh where? What a trip that one was..... whew great images!!
Jesse Jaymz
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4 posted 2000-12-05 09:04 PM


can i come too?????     great peice.  and if you really wanna make a trip, let me know.  heehehehhehe
love ya
jesse


Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

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5 posted 2000-12-05 11:13 PM


Thank you Tom..so glad you enjoyed..thank you for peeking in..

Sven..thank you..yes they certainly are ha..nice to hear from you tonight..

ethome..ill send you the directions ha..thank you ethome ..always appreciate your comments.

jesse..he he yourself haa..bad boy jesse..

                   ~Victoria~



A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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6 posted 2000-12-06 12:30 PM


Victoria, I'm not surprised. I've always considered you a heavenly body  
Irish Rose
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7 posted 2000-12-06 05:52 AM


This should get at least 100 replies, what man could resist!

What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman



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8 posted 2000-12-06 08:37 AM


Thanks Deery..but dont get your hopes up haa...

Katheleen..thanks but so far i have about 90 more to go ha...thanks for peeking in the mens room haa...

              


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


JamesMichael
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9 posted 2000-12-09 07:20 AM


Victoria this is nice...heavenly kisses...do you think they kiss in heaven...I know I will if I still have lips...ha...James
Victoria
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10 posted 2000-12-09 10:03 AM


thank you James..and yes i think they do..
im sure angels have lips too.

                     ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Zyell
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11 posted 2000-12-09 10:13 PM


Victoria, what beautiful images, wow!
you do have a way with romance!!

lovely,

*S*
Z

"I am an abstract of Circles"

Victoria
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12 posted 2000-12-10 12:19 PM


thank you Zyell..so nice of you to peek in tonight..HUGS..

                  ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Wilfred Yeats
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13 posted 2000-12-10 11:49 AM


Absolutely Beautiful Victoria - Great response to challenge  ~S~ I really wish I had more time to write
Victoria
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14 posted 2000-12-10 12:51 PM


I wish you did too billy..so glad you enjoyed my friend..HUGS

              ~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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Deep in the heart
15 posted 2000-12-10 12:55 PM


Being a Martian
wishing I was Apollo
I observe your love

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


brian madden
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16 posted 2000-12-10 01:09 PM


I accept your challenge and gaze into the Heavens, your words make the view all the more beautiful.  

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

Victoria
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17 posted 2000-12-10 04:16 PM


Thank you interloper..my martian friend  

brain..thank you for peeking in today

              ~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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