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the rainbow of life
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the rainbow of life |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Gallery Reading Room when she's gold gleaming like a wheatfield in the prairie sun waving in the wind you can hear her song when she's red pulsing like a heartbeat in a passionate song driven by the guitar you can feel her heat when she's blue icy like a wintry wind in December's night blown from the north you can touch her pain when she's green quiet like a forest in the North woods deep and silent you can know her soul when she's indigo darklight like the sunrise on a Summer's morn over the lake you can see her tears when she's silver glistening like a diamond of the purest order before your eyes you can marvel at her beauty she is the rainbow of life a palette of colors like no other her heart the canvas my love the brush the pictures we paint, living forever -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And you pen it so well. Superb piece from you. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Sven, this is fantastic, I hope your water droplets never fall . A truely beutiful poem, on a truely beutiful subject . I enjoyed it lots . Many Thanx . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i almost missed this beauty..lovely words sven..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sven, A beautiful write I'm glad I stopped in. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Beautiful illustration of the ups and downs of life. You just never know where it will go from here. Well done. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh yes colors. I love using colors to discribe love. What you have written here is a rainbow of feelings and you have done so with incredible beauty. Wonderful writing, dear one. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ A big WOW on this stunning piece. Don't think I've seen lovelier from your brush. What a well-crafted masterpiece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Touched by the colors in the wind with this one. Great write from you. Deb |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Somehow, the oils of the paint run liquid on the screen of Passions...and mesmerizes all... how lovely this is, and how talented you are...keep your muse...she suits you well... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Excellent writing...enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sven, this is eloquent... Beautiful my PoetFriend I am in awe at this 'Masterpiece' and I shall thread to library to keep coco |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Ooopsie I didn't hit the thread button I apologize you guyz N gurls I'll get this time... coco |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ What a most beautiful picture you have painted, this is indeed the most beautiful read I have had tonight...well penned my friend, I loved it ENJOYED IMMENSELY Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Masterful writing Sven...just exceptional!! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sven... this is so beautiful. truly a rainbow, the way you have all the colors here symbolizing different things. once again the "master of romance and poetry" has struck again. take care my friend! ~amy~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Mark, thank you for reading. . . angelswing, many thanks from me for your words. . . Victoria, thank you. . . rp, glad that you stopped in also. . . LW, not just ups & downs, but lefts & rights too, thank you. . . Startime, thank you. . . colors are my favorite things. . . Marge, thanks for the WOW. . . . . . pulling out the brushes again. . . Deb, thank you. . . the wind keeps blowing. . . Sunshine, thank you. . .it's amazing what you can do with the right brush. . . and I intend to keep this muse as long as I can. . . Poeminister, thank you my friend. . . PoetFriend Coco, thank you for stopping in. . . twice. . .  tracie, I am honored by your words. . . thank you. . . ethome. . . thank you my friend. . . Amy, the "master"? Well, I wouldn't go that far. . . but thank you for reading. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Well, if not "The Master" how about, "ONE of the Masters"? This is a wonderful poem, shows the many colors and sides to us all. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Very nice,my friend! |
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