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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-12-05 03:16 PM



~Sparks Of Hope~

Warm fireplace mantel holds memories in frames of gold
fire melts a heart of ice, as flames of longing embrace the emptiness
seeking a refuge from the ice cold winds of heartbreak
sparks of hope ignite

BloomingRose


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Victoria
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1 posted 2000-12-05 03:20 PM


sparks of hope bring flames
of wishes come true
lovely words Deb

                ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


JamesMichael
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2 posted 2000-12-05 03:44 PM


And thats when it gets good when you start having hope again and longing, and desires.  James
Sven
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3 posted 2000-12-05 06:38 PM


wonderful and warming. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-12-05 07:41 PM


Don't let that spark burn out because soon enough it will turn into a roaring blaze to warm you through and through.  So nice to see one of yours in here my friend.  I know you are busy with the season and all, but I do hope you are finding time for yourself so you don't go nuts trying to keep up.  

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
5 posted 2000-12-06 01:06 AM



Deb-
   so warm and tender...and beautiful as always..
   i really like it..

   hugs,
   ~vicky





"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
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6 posted 2000-12-06 01:10 AM



BloomingRose... this is a delicate expression

Especially the glitter of hope weaved into the poem...

I enjoyed the read immensely

coco

BloomingRose
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7 posted 2000-12-06 08:37 AM


Victoria~ Thank you and yes there is always a flicker of hope burning in me

James~ So true... thank you

Sven~ Thank you, glad your this warmed your heart

Mark~ Busy these days but the flame for poetry still burns... thank you and nice to see you on... looking forward to your wonderful poetry

Vicky~ Thank you and I hope to spend more time in this world of poetry after the Christmas holidays

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