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Potion of the Night
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Potion of the Night |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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sweet potion of ~jasmine~ serenaded us it consumed us in passionate embrace the fragrance of the night surrendered dark silhouettes danced in candlelight waltzing upon the naked wall of desire sultry wind whispered sweet nothings seducing the dew upon hearts window hypnotic whirlpools ~cobalt blue~ magically drawn into the depths of mine searching for the ocean of love moonlight waves cascaded soft lace the love within my soul.. your nectar the nature of our love blossomed blooming in passionate pools of jasmine A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-05-2000).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
waltzing upon the naked wall of desire ============================================ WOW! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you interloper..i guess that means you like it ha..thank you for taking the time to read  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
If this is a love potion of which you write..and I sure it is..I would like to order a sample potion...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'm going to have to start calling you 'the artist of virtual reflections' wonderful scenes weaving in and out here...!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes, a draught long needed. . . wonderful Victoria. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
James..thank you but i bet you have your own potion bottled somewhere  ethome..this should of been called for the men of passions ha..so glad you enjoyed.. sven...thank you so much..nice to hear from you.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So do you bottle this or not? I am sure that I could use a bottle or two. What a wonderful write from you. You seem to be growing in leaps and bounds of late. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Love to drink your writing Victoria  It's a…. Liquefied emotional wanting Desires of you haunting Sweat of joy drips from your pool Deep with urge in naked rule Splashing in sparks heated moment Fire eyes dancing at me you sent Face soaked with wet love kisses Granting touches and wishes Travelling faster towards light speed Two bodies embraced with greed Twisting time in a glance of danger Yesterday we lived a stranger Now thoughts of smiling and then Eyes tell another story of when The potion given of loves taunting When I drank the liquefied emotional wanting |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
WOWOWOWOWOWOWWOOWOWOWOWOW, and did i say WOW!!!! i think that whilpool sucked me in. great job =) love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'hypnotic whirlpools ~cobalt blue~ magically drawn into the depths of mine searching for the ocean of love' Whew! How sensually romantic! Love this! sp  'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Victoria, this is so vivid and rich. You do create a mood. (I haven't gone over to Amazon yet, tomorrow's my day off LOL lots of catch up to do ) Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thanks Mark..actually i am writing again..alot of my poems were older ones..i love the signature at the bottom of your response..so true. insect..thank you for that poetic response we should hear from you more.. Jesse..thanks Jesse..ha calm down.. snowpants..thank you so much snowpants..nice to hear from you Thanks sandra..glad you like..and have a great day off.. ~Victoria~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-06-2000).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love can be so beautiful....love the imagery that you have given here. love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Charisma..always nice hearing from you..so glad you enjoyed..HUGS to you too.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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