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vandana
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0 posted 2000-12-05 12:27 PM


When the days are gone by,
Yet years have to come,
More each day,
I miss those days of love,
When the time has come
To tell you,
Though ,
You are not here with me,
I was remembering you a lot,
I was thinking of the time,
When we are together,
We used to laugh and cried,
We used to share dreams,
Here I'm,
Sitting all alone,
I read those lines of yesterday,
As I turn the pages,
It has been ages,
I'ven't seen you
For a while,
I close my eyes,
And thought of you,
I was remembering the time
when we used to sing,
I was remembering
those memories
That linger Into my mind,
I was remembering those time of love,
Remembering you a lot!!!!!!!!


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1 posted 2000-12-05 01:34 PM


Those memories are precious to me too...it's like a little vacation in my mind I can take whenever I like...nicely penned vandana, you helped ME to remember, and that, my friend, is quite a feat!
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2 posted 2000-12-05 04:19 PM


I think I will remember this ... and you  



Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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3 posted 2000-12-05 06:36 PM


wonderful vandana. . .

memories for all of us. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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4 posted 2000-12-05 10:40 PM


vandana,

Thank you for sharing your memories with us.  May you make new memories that will keep you warm always.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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5 posted 2000-12-06 08:00 AM


VanDana~
Just beautifully rendered, my dear.
Lovely thoughts from your heart you've shared.
~*Marge*~


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6 posted 2000-12-06 09:54 AM


vandana...

this is beautiful. hold onto those memories.
they are worth more than all the gold on
this Earth.   take care.

~amy~

vandana
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7 posted 2000-12-07 02:45 PM


Yes,I will always remember you all!!!!!!!!Because you all have been there for me,reading my poems everytime.Thank you
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