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Fresh Snow Haiku
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Fresh Snow Haiku |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Fresh snow on the ice Beautiful on frozen lake Trouble on highway! 12-5-2000 |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i liked the way your second and third lines contrast each other....couldnt resist a smile there  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dennis, Clever, enjoyed. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
How something can be beautiful in one setting and then so dangerous in another. |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Clever concatenation between nature and modern life.Nice work. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Absolutely agree with your perception. I've always wished we could have beautiful snow and ice and dry pavement on highways. Once learned in a part of Sweden, the geo-thermal heating for the city runs under the highways. It warms the pavement making it only wet, while winter places icing upon the land and roof tops. Wouldn't that be great! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dennis; Sometimes the deception of beauty is a scary thing. You penned it well in this Haiku. Great writing as usual! Love, Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I like this one! Deb |
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