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SEA
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0 posted 2000-12-05 09:56 AM



I find within your words
A key to unlocking a part of your heart
A piece of your soul
A corner of your mind
~*~
You give me pieces of you
A treasure immeasurable
Allowing me to see, to hear, to feel
Your innermost feelings, thoughts, needs
~*~
You trust me with the knowledge
I find within your words
Showing me such  vulnerability
All the while radiating courage~ strength
~*~
You share with me the magic,
The romance of a thousand lifetimes
And touch my heart in such ways
I know I will be forever changed
~*~
Our hearts beat in tune
We are together as one
I feel you ~ I know you
Within your words

~SEA~


[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 12-05-2000).]

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Sven
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1 posted 2000-12-05 12:38 PM


As we know you my friend. . .

Wonderful. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


wayoutwalt
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2 posted 2000-12-05 12:42 PM


SEA i like this but you know that cuz we know  each other yuh?
Marsha
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3 posted 2000-12-05 01:18 PM


Circe, this is absolutely the best of the best. You've blown me away with this, you really and truly have. This is excellant, truly outstanding, and you know I love it don't you, yes of course you do.
Wonderful Circe, really wonderful
Take care
              Mushy
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Wilfred Yeats
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4 posted 2000-12-05 01:21 PM


Sometimes I think Marsha might just be a mite too effusive in her compliments - not this time, I echo every word ~S~
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5 posted 2000-12-05 01:36 PM


Our hearts beat in tune
We are together as one
I feel you ~ I know you
Within your words
=================================
To never see or meet one another, yet the words above are so true.

Well said, 1derful SEA.


Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


jwesley
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6 posted 2000-12-05 01:45 PM


Guess I'll have to get in line but ... I'm yours Sea!!

Beautifully worded my friend, outstanding tribute, but knew it would be, coming from you.

jwesley

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SEA
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7 posted 2000-12-05 02:58 PM


Sven~ thank you  

Walt~ yes, sweetie, I know  

Marsha~ thank you so much!  

WY~ Hugs to you sweet man  

Interloper~ I hoped you'd like this  

JWesley~ thank you.....I think the line is short  

-SEA

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8 posted 2000-12-05 05:31 PM


Oh, SEA, what a wonderful tribute! I wasn't sure at first that it was for me but I discovered the acrostic you hid so well! True, they are intentionally not in the right order but all of the letters that spell out Balladeer are cleverly hidden there! Thank you, SEA!!! Anybody ever tell ya that Florida is great this time of the year???  
SEA
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9 posted 2000-12-05 06:12 PM


My dear sweet 'DEER, you are so clever!   You know I am one of your biggest fans  , and actually, I was in Florida from Oct-Dec.( a few years ago) and I think it's a most wonderful time of year to be there.......I loved Florida......the East coast is beautiful. So happy you read this   -SEA
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10 posted 2000-12-06 04:02 PM


oh Sea I am glad that I found this one way back ..... and yes as always I like it...
thank you for sharing these magic piece with us......

((hugs))
Charisma

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11 posted 2000-12-06 05:03 PM


SEA, yes I must agree this is a wonderful tribute. Thank you for posting it...
You are just so sweet to do something this sweet.  

Parker

SEA
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12 posted 2000-12-06 05:25 PM



Charisma~   thank you for bringing it back up, I'm glad you liked this  


Parker~ hello handsome   I wrote this because of you and the other wonderful men here.......you touch my heart and make me smile......hugs to you sweet friend  

-SEA

The Lonely Stranger
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13 posted 2000-12-06 07:00 PM



"The romance of a thousand lifetimes"

What a WONDERFUL stanza, just WONDERFUL




[This message has been edited by The Lonely Stranger (edited 12-06-2000).]

Poeminister
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14 posted 2000-12-06 07:20 PM


SEA--Lovely tribute.  Nicely done.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

Startime
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15 posted 2000-12-06 07:25 PM


Bravo!!!Your talent shines brightly in this wonderful poem, dear one. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. All are as you say and I, for one am quite impressed by the quality of men at this board. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


Bill Charles
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16 posted 2000-12-06 07:28 PM


SEA,

A treasure you have written, just beautifully done. Enjoyed reading this, and also the meanings of your words.

BC

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17 posted 2000-12-06 07:32 PM



SEA, how splendid this write you have done for the poetmen of passions....

I say you excelled in the challenge by all means sweetie...

My compliments dear friend...

coco

PoeticKnight
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18 posted 2000-12-08 09:38 AM


Wow...i had to bring this back up. One, becuase i like it, and two, i'm not used to seeing a poem for the guys in here. Usually its tributes for the lady poets. Very nice poem.
Irish Rose
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19 posted 2000-12-08 10:25 AM


Anyone would be thrilled to have this written for them, it's lovely

What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman



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