Can You Feel It (SEA's Dr Seuss Challenge, I think)

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Open Poetry #11

Can You Feel It (SEA's Dr Seuss Challenge, I think)

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

0 posted 2000-12-05 08:09 AM

Can You Feel It

Can you feel it?
When you sit
When you stand
Feel it a bit?

Hold it
Enfold it
Can you?
Unroll it

Can you touch it?
Do you love it?
Do you?
Really love it?

What is it?
Where is it?
How and why is it?
I know it
And I love it

Love is it
We all love it
Don't we?
Just a little bit

Marsha

Circe, I'm not sure if this is right or not, well anyway please let me know.

Take care
Mushy

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-12-05 10:00 AM

Circe is smiling!
You did a fantastic job with this!

Enjoyed this very much!
Thanks for doing my challenge!

~SEA~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2000-12-05 10:11 AM

Yes, we love it if love is it!

fun way of saying it ;o}

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2000-12-05 10:31 AM

come and see
what Marsha said
what Marsha read
when she said
come and see
what Marsha wrote
imagine her
in fancy boat
imagine her
in SEA divine
imagine her
in rhymin' time
come and see
what Marsha said
come and see
what SEA said...

Cool!< !signature-->

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-05-2000).]

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2000-12-05 01:11 PM

Circe, is it really love, and is 'it' really what you meant

It was fun it really was, I did a couple more, so shall I post them.

Or leave them to be deleted by this thing crashing again.
Thank you sweet
Take care
              Mushy

VAS, thank you muchly, it is isn't it

Kari, now that is very very good, I like that much more than mine. Thanks kid, I do like your words so much, I really and truly do.

Take care
Majestic Marsha

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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