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While I'm Still Missing You
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While I'm Still Missing You |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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While I'm Still Missing You ~*Marge Tindal*~ Sleepless nights come and go Moments tossed without recall Never do you cross my mind Well, almost, never at all Sometimes though I wonder when the night is tossing me asunder Who's been kissing you while I'm still missing you ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
And all I can do is let out a big 'ol sigh... *sigh* So simple, and says so much |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, this is so simple but says soooooo much. I really love this one, a really excellantly written poem from you, ideal. Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Margie~ This is so sweet, a wonderful little poem...lovely  ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Such bittersweet thoughts Marge.. and thoughts that EVERYONE has felt at one time or another... Nicely done, my friend..  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Oh this one got me Marge...so filled with longing and whispers...just beautiful~ *hugs* The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Marge.......Beautiful said. wonderful piece ......it make me *sigh* love it. btw. thank you for your visit on my homepage, and I am glad that you like the pages more. I am real busy with changing it, but it takes a lot of time. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ you have such an amazing ability to touch a spot in absolutely everyone's heart.....this is beautiful.....I felt every word. -SEA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sounds like a song.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Marge I think everyone's had those thoughts they just don't know how to express them this well...ethome |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This would make a great song Deb |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You know my friend, I think of you in the night sometimes and in those thoughts I am wishing for you a peaceful and loving slumber. Wonderful write from you and I JUST hate it when those nights keep me from sleep, don't you? Well, maybe not entirely, but a good nights sleep would be nice once in awhile. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Satiate~ Your *sighs* are heard here ! Marsha~ Thanks for the reply, doll. Tracie~ Thanks for thinking so. Nan~ I thank you for your thoughts. Yes ... I would guess most have felt it. ButterfliesDC~ It would seem to whisper and I thank you for hearing it. Charisma~ Your sighs are appreciated. I can see how hard you've worked on your web site. Keep it up, gal. SEA~ Sometimes, I know it is meant to touch someone - I just don't always know who. Glad always to share with you. Karilea~ You know me well. Yep, that's how it started. ETHome~ Ohhh, what a nice thing to say. Thank you, sweet man. BloomingRose~ Thanks, hon. You've been missed. Good to see you. I agree - and I just might have to expand this one. I'll let you know if and when I do. MarkB~ Hello, love. So - the two of us maintaining those night thoughts, huh ? Reaching out - touching hearts. You sleep, love - I'll keep the watch. Love you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Lovely poem,Marge.It touched me. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Marge In so many simple words you summed up everything I think and feel and wonder Excellent write from you, i enjoyed it so much Those sleepless nights seem endless but eventually the sun does rise. "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Can I deny these thoughts? - certainly not - should I? - of course - but we all have them. Beautifully expressed as always~S~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ I feel the longing. So distant, but yet so sweet. Wonderful. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Marge....simple yet says so much...Loved it.... ~LL~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marge, ya know I caught that 'almost' in the verse you write above and once again in a few lines your pen speaks in volumes my dear... Great write sweetie!! hugs2u |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- 'Sometimes though I wonder when the night is tossing me asunder Who's been kissing you while I'm still missing you' boy, have i been there before... you've certainly captured a longing spirit within these words... i love it.. love and hugs, ~vicky< !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 12-06-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh Marge, why did I have to go and get a full time job, I want nothing more than to read and reply to poetry all day long! This read like a song.....more! more! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
less is more when well written and emotive. this was very touching and pleasurable. thanks Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tony~ Thanks for letting me know. Martini~ Hope your sun is shining. Thanks for the read. Wilfred~ Enjoyed your reply. Thank you. LoneWolf~ *Hugs* for you, my friend. LadyLightning~ Glad you liked it . Thanks. Dani~ You're a sweetie ! Thank you, again for enjoying what I do. Vicky~ A longing spirit - perfect. Yeah, that's it exactly ! Thank you, gal. Kathleen~ Oh ... me too ! I want to stay home and be a poet ! KoKo~ I'm pleased to meet you. Thanks for the read and the reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Been there, done that, bought the t-shirt! LOL. This is great, Marge! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Suthern~ Girl - I know what you mean ! Hope the T-shirt fit ! Love you for your thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
yes, i know that feeling of longing all too well...you keep steadying your mind to go blank but the memories still surge towards you...sigh.... well, life goes on, doesnt it? |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
All I can say is this got to me...I wonder about this too, but can't say tht I really want to know the answer... |
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Rowen Junior Member
since 2000-12-07
Posts 12 |
Almost never at all...I know that well. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Oh, you are so right, my friend. *Hugs* Elizabeth~ Sweetie, none of us want to know - but the thought lingers, yes ? *Hugs* Rowen~ Thank you for the read and your thoughts. Welcome to Passions In Poetry. You'll like it here. *Thanks to everyone for your warm response to this little piece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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