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thecookiemonstr Junior Member
since 2000-12-05
Posts 13Cape Coral FL |
Soul- < !signature-->Hello my friend I feel your pain Why wont you let go Time It will make you whole again Let go I am here I will always be here Heart- Thank you But I cant She is all I know All I feel I am not my own She holds me I cant let go Soul- My friend You burn with her fire But she is cold Is she worth the emptiness you feel It consumes you I am here Please let go Heart- But I love her Soul- Silence… Heart- There might be a chance Love It could happen Again Soul- You beat with poison It will break you I am here for you Through thick and thin Good and bad Time does not have a hold on us There will be another Won’t you try Heart- Can you let go my friend She is your mate And there is only one Only one And so I shall beat -Let love be symbolized by a circle. It is whole and complete, no beginning or end. Stand in the middle and it surrounds you. [This message has been edited by thecookiemonstr (edited 12-05-2000).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Good picture of the 'struggle.' |
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thecookiemonstr Junior Member
since 2000-12-05
Posts 13Cape Coral FL |
Thank you my friend, I feel we have all had this struggle at one time in our lifes. -Let love be symbolized by a circle. It is whole and complete, no beginning or end. Stand in the middle and it surrounds you. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to Passions, cm... This is a wonderful place, and your insight will be most welcome here. You've crafted a wonderful poem here... Check your email for a special greeting..  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CookieMonster~ Welcome to Passions.  I particularly enjoyed this thought - 'You burn with her fire But she is cold' Says so much ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
as was said.. 'before you can write well, you especially have to hurt like hell'... this drips with hurt..and i'm sorry for that.. even still..i welcome your poet.. proud to make his aquaintance..hugs,g< !signature--> "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 12-05-2000).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Welcome to passion!!!!!!!! Nice poem!!!!!!!!!! |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You have come to a very special place. Keep writing you have a special talent. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Welcome to Passions, cookiemonster...I enjoyed this much, as my heart and soul argue constantly too...quite an interesting form you have here too...I'll be looking forward to much more from you!!! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I enjoyed your poem and look forward to seeing more of your work!  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
CM, Wow, powerful feelings here. The inner struggle continues . . . Welcome to Passions! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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thecookiemonstr Junior Member
since 2000-12-05
Posts 13Cape Coral FL |
thank you all, your thoughts and comments inspire me. I am truely new to this and welcome your thoughts. -Let love be symbolized by a circle. It is whole and complete, no beginning or end. Stand in the middle and it surrounds you. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Welcome to Passions!! I love how you did this. Talking from the heart and soul and mind. Genuine writing from the heart. <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Well Hello, welcome to Passions, enjoyed your poem and the discussion between the heart and soul. Wonderful! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Yep yep yep...know this feeling very well...which one do you listen to? Great write and welcome to our world Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
I must hop on this wagon and welcome you- looks like the site has attracted another talented poet. Good luck and god bless A real man kisses his children goodnight |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
CookieMonster... this is an endearing tug of heart and soul An exquisite entree you have penned and shared amongst us poetfriends... Thank you for the read coco |
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lisad Junior Member
since 2000-12-05
Posts 22 |
Your words truly touched me.. It was as though I could feel your pain.. I look forward to reading more of your work.. Welcome to the forum.. lisad |
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thecookiemonstr Junior Member
since 2000-12-05
Posts 13Cape Coral FL |
wow so many replys and it's only be a day. thank you for feeling this with me, it lets me know I am not alone. although I still don't know who is winning the struggle... -Let love be symbolized by a circle. It is whole and complete, no beginning or end. Stand in the middle and it surrounds you. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome ... and what a debut! Let's see some more of this |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Great conversation from two opposing perspectives. Hold on, let go...both will cause incredible pain. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
cookie- WELCOME to Passions... such a sad and heartfelt write you've shared for your entrance... i feel a big 'ouch' in this one...hope it feels better soon... can't wait to get to know your poet better... hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome to Passions!! Good poem describing the internal conflict that can reside within!! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
cookiemonster, I liked this Welcome to Passions I'm sure you will like it here. I have to say that I love the line "I am not my own". ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
Hey there welcome to passions. I enjoyed the poem - not the pic ..  j/k ~grin~seriously - great poem philip |
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