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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-12-05 12:14 PM


long road to unwind
travel to destiny, ride
come again winsome

       ~*~

travel on, beyond
see the glint in eye of light
beyond, travel on

       ~*~

seek and ye shall find
the gift of love shall unwind
find and then give all

       ~*~

come what may as is
often times: live is let live
peace be to you now

       ~*~

remember then you
all of what you say and do
but remember kind

       ~*~

be with me and you
all things that you say and do
travel safe all time


Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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Marsha
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1 posted 2000-12-05 07:56 AM


Kari, this is exquisite, utterly beautiful, it's wonderful, it really and truly is. I love this one, I really do.
Take care
                Majestic Marsha
                        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Nan
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2 posted 2000-12-05 07:59 AM


Venture be thy trek
Wending roads winding before
Safety in sojourn

Charisma
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3 posted 2000-12-05 09:45 AM


oh love these senryus......they are really wonderful Karilea.

((hugs))
Charisma

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4 posted 2000-12-05 12:41 PM


journey on life light
some you will journey alone
but peace will be there

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Sunshine
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5 posted 2000-12-05 02:57 PM


Marsha, you little lift in pink...thank you...

Nan, that is a lovely addition...thank you...

Charisma, thank you...

Sven, glad you added in, thank you....


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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6 posted 2000-12-05 03:22 PM


I'm a travelin' man
made a lot of stops
all over this world
but never stopped on
verse this good 'til now.



Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Sunshine
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7 posted 2000-12-05 10:26 PM


Interloper, so glad you got into the melody of things...one of my favorite songs...thanks!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




kaile
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8 posted 2000-12-07 01:05 PM


people you will meet
varying forms and sizes but
be good friend always

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9 posted 2000-12-07 01:35 PM


seek and ye shall find
the gift of love shall unwind
find and then give all
==============================
Love it


Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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