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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2000-12-04 10:44 PM


I need not diamonds
to feel your love,
nor do I need roses
carried by a dove.

I do not need perfumes
expensive, from afar,
I need not a house
nor a fancy car.

No, don't give me diamonds
or a great piece of art,
just give me the gift
the gift of your heart.




On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. ~me~


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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2000-12-04 10:46 PM


sweet big smiles to you so wonderfully said o yuh
Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2000-12-04 10:58 PM


Softly smiling here and thinking how lucky I
am to have such love, and such good friends here at passions.  Thank you.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. ~me~


Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 2000-12-04 11:15 PM


GS* At first the title told me you had lost
your mind   but after reading....this is
absolutely beautiful..and yes the heart is
the only thing of value or worth when it
comes to love...the rest is merely clutter~


The best and most beautiful things
in the world cannot be seen or even touched
---- they must be felt with the heart~
*??*

Sunshine
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4 posted 2000-12-04 11:19 PM


I've been given diamond
I thought that it was "IT"
and now I see that diamond
in treasured drawer just sit

I see a diamond in the eye
of the giver, can you see...
I see it in the sparkle
of the eye that loves just me...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2000-12-05 08:49 AM


yes, GS, you are indeed very lucky *s

beautiful words..

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


Sven
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6 posted 2000-12-05 06:55 PM


a gift always given. . .

wonderful GS. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Aimster
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7 posted 2000-12-06 09:28 AM


GS~

this is wonderful! the heart is the
most precious gift to be given. nothing
else really matters when you think about
it. the gift of love is the ultimate gift.
you have said this very well!
take care.
~amy~

inot2B
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8 posted 2000-12-06 09:34 AM


Yes, that is the most cherished gift that can be given.
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
9 posted 2000-12-06 10:24 AM


The one gift that can truely keep on giving and of course we all know that it is the only one that truely counts.  Loved the read, now I guess I better go return some of these gifts I have purchased.  

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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10 posted 2000-12-06 11:37 AM


beautiful GS, who needs diamonds?? *L*  if I raised my hands think the gods would notice?? Loved this, always a pleasure...

Greeneyes

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown


Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2000-12-08 05:48 PM


Butterflie,  *L*  Nope I haven't lost  my mind.  So right you are, the rest is just clutter.  Thank you.  

Sunshine, what beautiful verse.  Thank you so much.  *s*

Wynter, I feel like I am very lucky.  Thanks.  

Sven, the best kind of gift....*s*

Thanks Aimee, I appreciate that.  *s*

So right you are Inot.  thank you.

Mark....lol.... I don't think you need to return the gifts, just keep in mind that the best gift
is love.  Thanks.

They might notice Lady.  *L*  So good to see you again.  Hugs.

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. ~me~


warmhrt
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12 posted 2000-12-08 05:53 PM


A ring of warmth, of love is worth much more than any gem. You have said this no sweetly!

Kris

All good poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings...~William Wordsworth

Gentle Spirit
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13 posted 2000-12-09 09:54 PM


Thank you warmht, it is truly love that is the most precious gift of all.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. ~me~


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