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nicolette
Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 42
St. Paul, Minnesota

0 posted 2000-12-04 05:03 PM



Come to me
and let my cold, empty arms
embrace your wanting desires.
I could make love to you
and let new emotions run thorough you.

Come to me
and let my warm, wanting mouth
envelope all your passions.
I don't want to own you.
I don't want to possess you.
I want to seduce you.

Come to me
and let my desiring, inviting body
take you to the realms of ecstacy.
I want you...
I long to feel you...
come to me now.

© Copyright 2000 Nicole Moham - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-12-04 05:19 PM


Whew!! you got any ice cubes to go with that .....this is extremely seusual...well that's the way you meant it to be...and guess what you really got me going!!
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
2 posted 2000-12-04 05:22 PM


Very hot write!   -SEA
Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2000-12-04 06:00 PM


yowser...now this is good!
excellent write...gotta clean the
steam off my screen  

take care.
~amy~

nicolette
Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 42
St. Paul, Minnesota
4 posted 2000-12-04 09:04 PM


Thanks for all the great feedback.  I'm glad I acheived the feeling I wanted to create!
SystemErroR
Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 13

5 posted 2000-12-04 10:39 PM


You have yet to send me the directions.......
Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
6 posted 2000-12-05 12:06 PM


Great write baby girl
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