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KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2000-12-04 03:49 PM

three million light years away
far above,
in another galaxy

Andromeda stars.
a whirling waltz
in cobalt blue

far below,
on the earth
autumn leaves dance in the wind.

{Abstract Renka}

© October 2000 Koko Stewart Koomoa (All rights reserved)

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

1 posted 2000-12-04 03:55 PM

Hmm. Interesting. A connection between the two occurances? I love the picture you have.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

2 posted 2000-12-04 04:02 PM

Thanks much for your comment.

It is a contrast : The dancing is occuring in far corners of a very vast universe that we live in.

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

3 posted 2000-12-04 04:16 PM

Beautiful graphic Koko...this is what I like...something abstract, deep, and totally original....brilliant piece!

Nathan

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2000-12-04 04:21 PM

Cobalt blue...a most beautiful color...and your imagery in words would have been electric with or without the graphic...very vivid...

Welcome to Passions!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

5 posted 2000-12-04 04:23 PM

WE ARE NOT ALONE
In the distant future
time is already done.
Great Graphics

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2000-12-04 04:29 PM

Two beautiful forms of beauty here and you have captured a lot with a little...and that always takes talent .. thanks for the work it's very very good!! Welcome to Passions I hope you enjoy your stay as much as I have...ethome.......

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

7 posted 2000-12-04 04:29 PM

Well I certainly feel welcomed here!
Thank you Nate Dogg, inot2bem, dragonpoe and sunshine for your time to read this poem and for your kind comments. You made my day!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

8 posted 2000-12-04 04:33 PM

Thanks for your wonderful, warm welcome also, ethome ! I feel et home already

I will be posting more haiku forms soon.

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Passion,imagination
  and intellect
    running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko


[This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 12-04-2000).]

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