Open Poetry #11 |
Like No Other Love |
dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Here's a simple little scribble, written on the spot to keep my creative juices flowing. With Christmas coming too quickly, I haven't had time to sit and write, so I made myself. Once upon a time ago I was a heartless wench who ran and drank and cared little about the world. I made my promises to be forever free, and lived loose and wild and careless then it all changed. A part of me seperated and the seed of life took root Inside my body I could feel a wonderful magic blooming. The wild music of what used to be died down to a soft lullabye as I held him in my arms and marvelled at his beauty. There are days I sit back and wonder what would have become of me, if I had stayed within the waves of immaturity. But I never regret, no not ever for now I have two, and I sit and watch as they grow from babies to boys, and wait til they grow to men. And I know with every part of my heart that there is no greater love, there is no other love, that can minimize this that I feel. And I, who once upon a time thought that I would love no one. And allow no one to love me. [This message has been edited by dragonpoe (edited 12-04-2000).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this was so wonderful to read. You gave me a very loving gift in these words you call scribbles. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Isn't it wonderful how a little seed can grow and bring so much pleasure in our lives. Thank goodness it helps us grow up! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is wonderful.......I wish my scribbles turned out like this........ My kids have grounded me and keep me focused on what's important.......and definately keep me young, staying home with them every day! Love this -SEA |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
A very well written "scribble" that is very touching. A wonderful tribute to motherhood! I enjoyed your work Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
"Scribble" on ... BRAVO! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a sheer pleasure to read..your love for your children shines warmly in this piece.... what Interloper said..."Scribble on" |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Thank you all.. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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