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Could you....Would you..(for my Dr. Seuss challenge)
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Could you....Would you..(for my Dr. Seuss challenge) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Could it be Would it be that you could love a woman like me? Is it now? tell me how that you love me Oh by golly WOW!! Will you give me kisses three? Come and give just one to me!! You could kiss me on my nose You could kiss my little toes You could kiss me here........ You could kiss me anywhere!! Would you be gentle when you bite? Would you stay thru the night? Would you snuggle up real tight? Baby your love......is outta sight!!  ~SEA~ Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
that's it i am gonna go out and see that grinch movie just so i can find out who this doctor seuss character is...geesh i didn't know i had to do homework for this site!! Love it SEA! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Walt~ I have the cartoon Grinch......love it! Haven't seen the movie yet, probably not until video....thanks for reading!  -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, this is wonderful, I love this challenge of yours, I really do. (I might give it a try) Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mushy~ glad you liked this, I hope you give the challenge a try, it's fun! - SEA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is cute!!! I tried this challenge and I just couldn't do it...You captured the voice quite well, I thought. Very well done...miles of smiles over here! |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Very cute... Dr. Suess in a whole new way!! With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity~ Happy to make you smile! DragonPoe~ I bet Dr. Seuss could wow us with some adult rhyme.....LOL -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Girl ! ... ya' done it good ! Smiling and thinking that the good Dr. would like it lots. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling with delight* this is really cute. I love it. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SEA, This is too cute!! ROFL!! You have given me a much needed laugh tonight my friend. Thank you. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
I love the poem and the challenge! It's a fun one! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ this was fun....glad you liked my try Startime~ I'm happy this made you giggle LW~ laughter is good for the heart! Debbie~ read yours over in the Pub and enjoyed it very much! -SEA |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
LOL! Thanks for the smile! |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
SEA, Very cute...I think I still know the Seuss books by heart from reading them to my kids a zillion times (they LOVED them), and this is true to his form. Good job, Kris All good poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings...~William Wordsworth |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
So glad you showed us yours, SEA. Fun one, too!! My mind was having fun racing off with the idea of a kiss in all the places Green Eggs and Ham were suggested. Heh-heh, that was fun, too! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- i am glad...glad i am you've written a cute little ditty, ma'am..lol. this is just too cute... i'm lovin' it!! hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
awwww Sea this is sooooo cool... This speaks to me of your sweet personality... I like it lots... ahun ahun !! coco |
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