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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2000-12-04 02:00 PM



I wish to honor you all
For the verse you write.
Knowing they are
Irrigated by tears,
Nourished by smiles,
Fertilized by thoughts,
Pruned by memories,
Held dear to heart,
Sometimes wrenching.
Hidden deep in mind,
Aired out by the writing.
Anguished at times,
Renewed by the sharing.
Folded with care,
Retired to their keeping place
* * *
Until the next time.




Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


© Copyright 2000 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2000-12-04 02:01 PM


I like this---nice
SEA
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with you
2 posted 2000-12-04 02:03 PM


Interloper~ Hugs and a smooch for you!! This is wonderful, thank you   -SEA
Startime
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3 posted 2000-12-04 03:36 PM


BRAVO!!Jumping into your arms and giving you a big hug. Wonderful. You are such a dear to us all. Much love from me to you.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


dragonpoe
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4 posted 2000-12-04 03:39 PM


  I can only smile< !signature-->

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe


[This message has been edited by dragonpoe (edited 12-04-2000).]

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-12-05 07:20 AM


InterLoper~
I greatly enjoyed these thoughts.
The poetic garden is alive and flourishing.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Charisma
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6 posted 2000-12-05 08:56 AM


until the next time, .......pretty thoughts and sharings inhere....it put a smile on my face.  

((hugs))
Charisma

vandana
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7 posted 2000-12-05 11:20 AM


Nice poem!!!!!!!!!!!
A Whisper's Caress
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8 posted 2000-12-05 01:12 PM


this is truly beautiful!!!

Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
9 posted 2000-12-06 06:00 PM


wayoutwalt~
My first time to hear from you.  Thanks for the read.  Glad you liked it.

SEA~
'Loper lowers his eyes and scuffs his toe in the dirt.  His neck and face are red ... "Thank you ma'am" he squeaks ...

Startime~
WOW!  This is getting to be fun!

Dragonpoe~


Marge~
Thanks for your kind words.

Charisma~
  Love those ((hugs))!

vandana~
My first time to hear from you.  Thank you.

AWC~
So are you!


Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


snowpants
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10 posted 2000-12-06 07:15 PM


Beautifully thoughtful write, Interloper!  Love it!!  

sp


'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me...

Bill Charles
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11 posted 2000-12-06 07:20 PM


Evening Interloper,

"Until The Next Time", I find this absolutely the most meaningful words I have seen in a while. Nicely done.

BC

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
12 posted 2000-12-23 09:20 AM


I do so enjoy finding treasures....

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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