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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2000-12-04 01:04 PM



Just over the hill
the brand shall not come from iron
but soft touch of heart

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2000-12-04 01:18 PM


Just over the hill
the brand shall not come from iron
but soft touch of heart
  

I stand on tiptoe
looking to the horizon
waiting each day's touch...

thank you  Interloper, 'tis lovely that you  think of me

~softsmiles
~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


Kethry
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2 posted 2000-12-04 01:36 PM


interloper

love brands by furnace
touching, searing and the rest
holding winter warmth

I love Haiku's and your's is especially nice.
Kethry.


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau



SEA
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with you
3 posted 2000-12-04 02:05 PM


Wow......*SIGH*......jealous....... -SEA
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2000-12-05 11:42 AM


nakdthoughts~
I am honored you liked it  

Kethry~
I think your first time to visit me.  Thank you VERY much.

SEA~
*sigh* golly, gee.  Wow.  Thanx.  Don't be, none could replace you.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2000-12-05 11:56 AM


Interloper knows
which way the wind might then blow
straight to touch the heart


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




kaile
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6 posted 2000-12-05 12:15 PM


appreciated the thought..will try to read nakdthoughts' poem....
A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
7 posted 2000-12-05 01:10 PM


soft touch of heart


sigh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

INclan
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8 posted 2000-12-05 01:30 PM


Just over the hill
the brand shall not come from iron
but soft touch of heart
for wisdom displays truth in
love which knows no bounderies

My response in Tanka form....

INclan

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
9 posted 2000-12-06 11:30 PM


Sunshine~
You just completed the melting of me  

kaile~
Thanks for the read.

AWC~
Now the melting has melted  

INclan~
Tanka you very much.



Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Victoria
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10 posted 2000-12-06 11:39 PM


very lovely interloper..and a soft heart
she does have...and a very good friend..

              ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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