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Dennis L. White
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0 posted 2000-12-04 11:57 AM


Scrape,(darn) scrape, (frost) scrape

Windshield is transformed o'er night

Privacy glass now!


12-4-2000


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-12-05 07:15 AM


Dennis~
LOL @ you !
A bit of a chill, huh ?
Keep warm, my friend.
~*Marge*~


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VAS
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2 posted 2000-12-05 10:14 AM


Cute way of looking at it.  A way to keep one's sanity when dealing with the harshness of winter's every day.
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3 posted 2000-12-05 10:21 AM


Had to laugh...loved it!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




INclan
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4 posted 2000-12-05 10:34 AM


Dennis,

Humor in poetry is a wonderful thing and your sense of humor is outstanding.  Yes, I have been there...done that (yesterday in fact...LOL).  Great posting!

INclan

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5 posted 2000-12-05 10:45 AM


you frosted my mind with great thoughts..

thank you Dennis

~Wynter


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...Pope John Paul II


kaile
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6 posted 2000-12-05 12:12 PM


im so sorry but the first thing that came to my mind was "we hanky panky"

i know im being cheeky here


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