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Kevin
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0 posted 2000-12-04 05:05 AM


I woke up not myself tonight
The same familiar blur
Stared out into the lack of light
Remembering who we were
For now my life does not seem right
And I cannot endure
This same repeating awful sight
Of which you hold the cure

No comfort from the friends so few
Who do not understand
They question the things that I do
When I speak of your hand
And how I would hold it so true
Embrace it with a band
To prove my ever love for you
My hearts only demand

Love I beg you please be strong
For weakness knows my name
I’ve waited oh so very long
To find our hearts the same
No longer I know right and wrong
Or the rules to this game
I only know that I belong
Inside your picture frame

So kiss me love while I’m awake
Let lips and worlds collide
In this moment let me take
You on our lovers ride
For you my heart will always ache
I long deep down inside
For bonds of secrecy to break
And fears to now subside




[This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 12-04-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
PaulF
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1 posted 2000-12-04 06:07 AM


This is great Kevin, your emotions come through very clearly.  Hope it works out for ya.
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2000-12-04 06:37 AM


Enjoyed reading this..James
Charisma
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3 posted 2000-12-04 08:36 AM


you have expressed your feelings very good.
love and enjoyed reading it.

Charisma

Kevin
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4 posted 2000-12-04 12:37 PM


thanks guys

*cloud 9*  

Aimster
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5 posted 2000-12-04 05:48 PM


Kevin~

this is beautiful! loved this very
much. i get so wrapped up in your poetry
sometimes i have to tell myself to
breathe hehe. take care.
~amy~

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6 posted 2000-12-04 06:32 PM


loved it kevin..nicely done..

                    ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


~ViXeN~
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7 posted 2000-12-09 12:44 PM


Kevin,
I knew this would always happen for ya. You deserve it more than anyone i know. I m so happy for you, and even though sometimes i might not show it, I really am! I hope things work out for the best!
Love always
Shan

inot2B
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8 posted 2000-12-09 01:19 PM


The words portray a deep love.
Be strong and enjoy while you
still can.

Startime
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9 posted 2000-12-09 01:24 PM


This is filled with heartfelt emotion and a wonderful read. Much love to you from me

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


Irish Rose
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10 posted 2000-12-09 07:58 PM


makes me wish I were about 30 years younger!



"Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version
of someone else." Marilyn Monroe


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11 posted 2000-12-09 10:11 PM


Kevin~
Such joy I read in this !
*Hugs* to you.
~*Marge*~


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