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Lamb I Am---SEA's challenge
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Lamb I Am---SEA's challenge |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Come and find me, says Lamb I Am. That Lamb I Am, that Lamb I Am You do not like that Lamb I Am. So you say, everyday You do not like Him Any way! Won’t you try Him in the dark? Won’t you try His Spirit’s spark? Won’t you try His wondrous glee? Try Him, try Him, you will see! That Lamb I Am, that Lamb I Am Won’t you try that Lamb I Am? Would you try Him in a boat? He would keep you well afloat. Would you try Him in a pinch? Would you try Him with a finch? Would you try Him on the house? Would you try Him in a blouse? That Lamb I Am, that Lamb I Am Won’t you try that Lamb I Am? Would you try Him with your sister? Would you try Him, right now, Mister? Would you try Him when you’re sad? Would you try Him when you’re mad? Would you try Him now with me? Try Him, try Him, you will see! That Lamb I Am, that Lamb I Am! How I love that Lamb I Am! He promised to be with me always, both in big and then in small ways. He carries me when I’m down; He lifts me up when I frown. He gave His life so I won’t die and I don’t need to ask Him why? That Lamb I Am, that Lamb I Am! Oh, how I love that Lamb I Am! If I try Him, will you go? If I try Him, then you’ll know! If you try Him, you will know! That Lamb I Am, that Lamb I Am! I do so love that Lamb I Am! I will follow where He leads! I will plant His loving seeds! Oh, Lamb I Am, Oh, Lamb I Am! You may have my life, I Am! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VAS~ Nice rise to the challenge of our SEA~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Well whatta ya know Lambic pentameter, and good message too  write on Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love it........this was really a wonderful read, within a good message ....well done. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
VAS~ I loved this!  Wonderful job and such a wonderful message too! Thank you! -SEA |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
great lines of devotion and repetition for emphasis, helps to keep the theme solid... good stuff!! |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
This is a delightful way to send your message! Nice Job! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
You all have uplifted me, thank you for your wonderful words. So happy you enjoyed my serious silliness. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
VAS, wonderful, and this is a great poem, witha lovely message. Really love this one Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
mg i loved it!!! going in the library If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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