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A Strand of You
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A Strand of You |
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simpleman46 New Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 7Michigan |
A whisper of hair glides across your cheek, And I imagine how it feels, To be That thoughtless curl, Cutting across your delicate features, To be That string of silk, Tickling your skin, To be A strand of you, Before I am brushed away. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Man46, I really enjoyed this poem I see it to be your first and I trust I shall have the pleasure to read many more... Very tender yet it whispers of sensual...  coco |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh, WOW! Tender, so tender, but magnificently powerful!! WEll done! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SimpleMan~ Such a delicate thought - very pretty. Welcome to the wonderful world of Passions In Poetry ! You're gonna like it here. So bring your muses and settle down to some wonderful poetic enjoyment. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Simply lovely.. Sometimes much can be said in very few words.. You've certainly accomplished that here. Welcome to Passions - It's a wonderful place to be - You'll love it here. Check your email for a special greeting..  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A whisper of hair glides across your cheek, And I imagine how it feels, To be That thoughtless curl, ============= how very poetic and lovely ... how very romantic to be that cherished. wonderful writing Welcome to Passions simpleman... so nice to have you here...I look forward to more of your work. take care jm I looked into the sky for my anthem The words and music came through But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen Looking into you |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
**Simplistically beautiful ** ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ mutington/joyce :) "I can live by myself, but not within myself." |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
this one is thrilled with desire, and so sweet and tender. well done Charisma |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wonderful first post!! what a simple, yet, completely romantic thought... "...to be that thoughtless curl..." awesome...!  and welcome to passions!! hugs, g "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I loved this and may use your strand for my Christmas poem if it is ok.. welcome ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WELCOME! This is stunning.......definate "wow", enjoyed this -SEA |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely thoughts.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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simpleman46 New Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 7Michigan |
Thank you for all the kind words! It's encouraging to get such a positive response from my very first post. I'll be sticking around this forum reading and posting for some time... thank you! |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
A whisper of hair glides across your cheek, And I imagine how it feels, To be That thoughtless curl, Cutting across your delicate features, To be That string of silk, Tickling your skin, To be A strand of you, Before I am brushed away. oh my!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is so incredibly beautiful!!!!!!!!!!! welcome to passions, wonderful entrance. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome, indeed! What a debut! I look forward to many more ... many more. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
"W*E*L*C*O*M*E SIMPLEMAN46", I applaud you on this outstanding peice... loved it! -Tier |
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nicolette Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 42St. Paul, Minnesota |
The person you love is one lucky person. To have someone so tender and admiring. That's a really beautiful poem. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, and what a vivid entrance...well done! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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