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JamesBowie
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2000-12-04 12:20 PM


Kittens and sushine and honey soaked dew
my dog stands alone, stepping in poo

Long grassy fields and sunflowers abound
my dog stands alone, retching on the ground

I romp and play shedding all my cares
my dog stands alone, his teeth he bares

For my dog has no love
no feelings to share
On my grave will be marked
"New owner beware"

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1 posted 2000-12-04 12:35 PM


Delightfully funny until that last line...CHILLS!!!!!!!!
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2 posted 2000-12-04 12:35 PM


JBowie~
LOL @ you !  
Poor puppy !
~*Marge*~


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JamesBowie
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack
3 posted 2000-12-06 12:32 PM


levity has it's place, no? by the way hi marge how are things?
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