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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2000-12-03 08:44 PM


A Toe-inspired poem


There is a Time

For every man there is a time to ponder his belief
There is a time for butterfly to spread its rainbow sheath
For new-hatched bird the time will come to stretch a feathered wing
For every soul there is a time to hear the angels sing

For every heart there is an hour of sorrow to endure
And with the darkness comes awareness unperceived before
For every night there is a dawn that’s new and fresh and clean
That brings a bright perspective that the eye has never seen

A passing shadow on the field for moments hides the sun
The knots of gnarled  grief in time will also come undone
So great will be the joy that we will cup our hands to hold  
The splendor of a lily as its velvet wings unfold

Darkness turns to laughter at the time the heart appoints
All that passes is a plan the hand of God anoints
There is a time to wipe the wetness out of sorrow’s eye
There is a time the timid wing will soar into the sky


Elizabeth Santos


[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 12-03-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2000-12-03 08:50 PM


Liz--This poem and you, are remarkable!!!
Hugs and love!

Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-12-03 08:56 PM


Once again, Lady Santos, you show your charm, loving heart, and spirit...and I applaud you...

thinking of you...

Hugs,


Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




CocoBaci
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3 posted 2000-12-03 09:05 PM



Oh my, LadyPoetFriend Elizabeth, this is so beautiful it touches my heart...

I shall keep this one in my library...
coco

Butterflies_dont_cry
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4 posted 2000-12-03 09:10 PM


As the beauty of your words pour into our
sight thoughts of you and yours stay in our
prayers~


The best and most beautiful things
in the world cannot be seen or even touched
---- they must be felt with the heart~
*??*

Balladeer
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5 posted 2000-12-03 09:14 PM


Thank you, Elizabeth, for showing what class and style really are. My thoughts are with you...
Severn
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6 posted 2000-12-03 09:19 PM


I'm echoing 'deer...
you wisdom is amazing my friend...

hey - I can hear your voice reading this you know..

thanks for the hope you inspire for the human spirit Lizzy.

Love always

K

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2000-12-03 10:31 PM


You, Elizabeth, are an amazing person. I always leave your poetry humbled and deep in thought. I thank you for that. HUGS to you.
Janet Marie
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8 posted 2000-12-03 10:33 PM


For every man there is a time to ponder his belief
There is a time for butterfly to spread its rainbow sheath
For new-hatched bird the time will come to stretch a feathered wing
For every soul there is a time to hear the angels sing

===================
Darkness turns to laughter at the time the heart appoints
All that passes is a plan the hand of God anoints
There is a time to wipe the wetness out of sorrow’s eye
There is a time the timid wing will soar into the sky
====================
you take my words with the grace of this...
allow me to echo Balladeers reply as his words are accurate and true the point of being poetic.
love you poet of wisdom and grace
jm


I looked into the sky for my anthem
The words and music came through
But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen
Looking into you

Aimster
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9 posted 2000-12-03 11:24 PM


i echo the others here in saying
this is truly beautiful and full of
your poetic grace.

take care.
~amy~

Poet deVine
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10 posted 2000-12-03 11:30 PM


A beautiful poem by a beautiful lady.  
Cerenity
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11 posted 2000-12-03 11:57 PM


Hi Liz,

Sheer beauty your words my friend, your strength and love I am simply in awe, sending hugs and prayers your way.

Love, Cerenity

JamesBowie
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12 posted 2000-12-04 12:01 PM


BEAUTIFUL.
Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2000-12-04 07:20 AM


LizzieLady~
Such a delicately worded piece of your heart.
Admiration from this corner of the world.
Love n'*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nan
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14 posted 2000-12-04 07:25 AM


I'm not sure that there are sufficient adjectives in the world to adequately describe you, Elizabeth...

You are.. incomparably remarkable indeed..

Kethry
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15 posted 2000-12-04 07:34 AM


Liz, beyond words! HuGS

Write on
Keth


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau



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16 posted 2000-12-04 07:38 AM


yes there is a time, for everything.
you have expressed your feelings quite well.

love this wonderful penned poem.

((hugs))
Charisma

Elizabeth Santos
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17 posted 2000-12-04 07:42 AM


Martie, sending hugs back to you

Sunshine, You are so kind, thankj you

Coco, you are always there to read and comment. Thank you, dear

Butterfly, Thanks for the thoughts and continued prayers

Balladeer, Your comments are very warming, thanks

Severn, When you come over here, I'll read it to you in person

Serenity, Your remarks are so kind and your hugs are so warm

JM, Thank you, dear poet

Amy, THanks, dear heart, for your comments

Poet deVine, Thanks so much

Cerenity, I accept all hugs andprayers with open arms

James, Thank you so much

Elizabeth Santos
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18 posted 2000-12-04 07:52 AM


Marge, People are sneaking up on me this morning, THanks, dear for all of your support

Nan, you have been one of my greatest inspirations, Even at a loss for adjectives, your comments warm my heart

Kethry. Thanks for your encouragement to write on

Charisma, Thanks you so much

suthern
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19 posted 2000-12-04 09:47 AM


One reaches out... another answers... beauty inspires beauty... and I'm inspired by the both of you. *S*

Absolutely lovely, Elizabeth.

Mark Bohannan
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20 posted 2000-12-04 11:44 AM


Your heart along with you amazing class always shine brightly for us all and this lovely verse of yours is proof of that.  You also continue to have my thoughts and prayers my friend.
Toerag
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21 posted 2000-12-10 11:27 AM


Yanno? I used to could write like this before the accident....Ya believe me right?.....this is superb gal.....I don't know how ya do it?...You know, rhymes, words spelled right, good flow.....LOL....and of course....the thought is always amazing from you....
ethome
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22 posted 2000-12-11 05:25 AM


There is so much wisdom and beauty in this work Elizabeth. I look forward to reading your kindly verses of life fashioned by the passage of time. It's heart warming to be able to enjoy such a reverence for the gift of life........ethome
Irish Rose
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23 posted 2000-12-11 05:58 AM


This humbled me, you are one fine lady and poet!



"Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version
of someone else." Marilyn Monroe


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