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My Lover, My Friend, My Life...
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My Lover, My Friend, My Life... |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
My Lover, My Friend, My Life Step by step, I walk the chill of the night air, my flesh aquatinted with the sting of cold, yet my soul is blanketed in warmth. The eyes of comfort hold me plainly in sight, as I trail the castle grounds, my brave knight, aware of my heart, stands as sentry from his station in the watchtower. Now, morning light pours toward me, and I wake recalling my dream, I have no castle nor a knight, but I have more. Your heart, your passion and your soul. At the hour I needed you most, your compassion rescued me, giving me life. Reeling in despair, your benevolent heart gave me hope, and soon wrapped me in love. My lover, my friend, my life, your compassion washed over me, and your heart realized it’s love for me ...and your eyes give me strength to view what is really there and now I truly see my knight, my castle. Annie Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
True love gives us all that is needed. A beautiful poem for a very deserving companion I'd say. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
A Whisper's Caress Lovely write. Very beautiful sentiments expressed through this...enjoyed reading as always... take care, Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
thank you both so very much. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this poem flows so smoothly together..i enjoyed the way how you came to write the last line.."and now i truly see my knight, my castle".... |
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