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Toerag
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0 posted 2000-12-03 01:51 PM


As we grow older,
And hair turns to gray,
Our thoughts and our bodies,
Change in all ways

A friend or a loved one,
Passes on leaving grief,
But they leave too our memories,
That touch us so sweet

The soul never dies,
Nor their memories depart,
They'll talk to you daily,
And live on in your heart

Time brings us healing,
It takes quite a while,
But their soul you'll carry with you
And will soon bring a smile

May God bring you peace,
May your heart quickly mend,
May your tears turn to laughter,
Till you're together again.


[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 12-03-2000).]

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Poet deVine
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1 posted 2000-12-03 02:56 PM


Toe, this shows your kind, loving heart. Wonderful poem sir.
Elizabeth
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2 posted 2000-12-03 02:56 PM


This is such a loving gesture.
Nan
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3 posted 2000-12-03 03:12 PM


Luv ya, Toe..

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-12-03 03:51 PM


Toe,
This is such a loving thought.
I've sent it to Liz by e-mail,
as she's having a hard time getting
into the forums right now on a dinosaur
of a computer until her other one gets
back from the shop.
She will be so pleased to see you.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine
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5 posted 2000-12-03 04:52 PM


Thank you Toe...

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Kethry
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6 posted 2000-12-03 05:26 PM


Toerag,
sensitive and sweet. What a lovely write you just threw up.
Keth


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau



Charisma
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7 posted 2000-12-03 05:26 PM


yes memories will always be marked in our heart.

love and enjoyed reading this.

Charisma

Martie
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8 posted 2000-12-03 05:33 PM


Toe--Hugs to you for this!
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9 posted 2000-12-03 08:01 PM


You da man, Toe....and a good, decent one, too. Be well, my friend...
Elizabeth Santos
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10 posted 2000-12-03 08:36 PM


Thank you, dear friend, for the lovely poem.I will respond to you with a poem. You warm my heart, dear man, more than you know
Liz

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11 posted 2000-12-03 09:02 PM



Toe, this is a beautiful write there's so much love of heart weaved into the rhyme it's a treasure of a poem indeed...

coco

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12 posted 2000-12-04 09:53 AM


This one brought tears to my eyes, dear one. You know how hard it is to render me speechless, but you've managed that with this one. *S* It's a beautiful poem from a beautiful heart... simply stunning!
Startime
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13 posted 2000-12-04 10:05 AM


A beautiful, heartfelt poem that brought tears to my eyes. Wonderful. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


kaile
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14 posted 2000-12-09 11:10 PM


im late with my reply but this brought a warm fuzzy feeling inside...just thought that your heartfelt gesture is appreciated
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