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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2000-12-03 09:46 AM


Finding You First

Unexpected on catlike feet
Entering, unnannounced
In poetic wrappings, gift of friendship
Words and phrases, for all to pounce
Upon the weavings, silkened thoughts
Twisted chords of songs to sing
Tapestries you share with all
Your unwrapped presence, that you bring.
Hear the words, read my find
Wishing only hopes and dreams
Reality to cross and bind
Forever firsts within your seams.


~Wynter

*based on this thought of mine-
"I only wish whatever happiness you wish to find...
it finds you first..."





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"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II






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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-12-03 10:07 AM


Aha! I certainly hope I have found you first!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2000-12-03 10:28 PM


thank you Karilea..I wrote this for a friend  I have made on the net..who I can no longer correspond with  because of jealousy on someone elses part..I released him from his friendship and I wanted to let  him know  he meant a lot as a friend...you know the games people play on here and in real are sad...when they restrict good honest friendships from continuing.

Thank you, dear one..for always noticing  my words...huggzz

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


Victoria
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3 posted 2000-12-03 10:45 PM


lovely Wynter..always enjoy your gentle words...HUGS

                       ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Sunshine
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4 posted 2000-12-03 10:48 PM


Yes Wynter, it happens...take care...be well...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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