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JamesBowie
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2000-12-03 01:35 AM


I can tell you of things I have seen
but only of how I percieved them
not in the whole truth of the scene
but only from my biased view
of events that occured

I always seem to think that I am different
but walk along the same paths
drink from the same water fountains
look at the same world, but only it is
done by my body and mind

There is a belief by some
that if they were to die, then
everything around would cease to exist
but that is foolish, unless you consider it
from their point of view

© Copyright 2000 James Bowie - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2000-12-03 01:46 AM


*grinning* this is so very true. I really enjoyed reading this. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2000-12-03 01:46 AM


I agree and they can keep their point of view. Nice thought provoking poem!!  Welcome to Passions...ethome
doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
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3 posted 2000-12-03 12:45 PM


true true true... interesting, because i have a poem in the works on a similar theme and it was good to get someone else's point of view while i'm busy trying to write it...

yeah, and also... if you are in a forest and a tree falls and you are deaf, did it really fall? lol... no WAIT! how does that go... i know! if there is one hand clapping in a forest without any trees, did the clapping make any noise? no... WAIT! that's not it... oh phooey! i can't remember....

hehe  

thanks for a great read, james!

JamesBowie
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack
4 posted 2000-12-03 11:20 PM


actually doreen My version of the tree falling is this

If a dog poops on the carpet

but there is no one there to spank him

is he really a bad dog?

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