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Nikolette Sadness
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0 posted 2000-12-03 01:29 AM


I'M BACK!...well at least fro tonight...miss me???this is my first post in more than a month...i haven't been on in forever..got a new job...and new complications...this is gonna be straight from my head...unedited

~Fear~
i fear thier knowledge
what if they know
what will i do?
where will i go?
what will they think
what will they say
will they even care
what i have to say?
it wouldn't matter
either way...

Nikolette Sadness



i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

© Copyright 2000 Nicole Crisp - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-12-03 01:34 AM


Great to have you back...very good questions they stimulate the imagination about things.. ethome
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-12-03 01:36 AM


You just gave voice to those little twinges of anxiety I sometimes feel. The final line also spoke to me as a poetic version of a shrug...well done, Nik.
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
3 posted 2000-12-03 02:28 AM


LOL baby girl good to see you back...I care you know that and it always matters to me.

Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings



Nikolette Sadness
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4 posted 2000-12-09 01:22 PM


thank you all for your replies...i dont really like this one much tho....heheh

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2000-12-09 03:00 PM


nik~

i really related to this poem
quite well. first off welcome back
to Passions. I have read a few pieces
of your work and it is good to have you
back among us if even only for a short
while...secondly, not too long ago i faced
these very questions in my own life over
something. i finally just decided to let
the truth set me free, and guess what?
it did   take care.

~amy~

kaile
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6 posted 2000-12-14 09:42 AM


hi,
i am now working on a new job too and i faced the same exact questions too..i still often wonder what those seniors feel about me, a novice and a blur one at that?LOL  

[This message has been edited by kaile (edited 12-14-2000).]

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
7 posted 2000-12-14 09:58 AM


*sigh* you voiced a little of the fear in all of us. Wonderful work. I look forward to reading more from you. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


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