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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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We are connected though we dont know how or where it comes from it just is We seem so scared sometimes to let the other see, what we feel, I left my heart upon the shelf for so long, that you almost don't seem real, though my ears have heard your laughter and my eyes have seen your face I dont want to try and explain where these feeling come from, I want to remember your breathing when I run my fingers down your chest, feel your heart beating when I caress my lips to yours, feel your soul weaving through mine, to remember the colors of your skin when you sleep, hear your whispers in the dark of night when we....just surround my self in your silence and be connected "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
a little California, but nice. Just harrasing you a bit, it is good to want to feel connected with someone- and the latter part is hot,whoops...,I mean well written to provoke feeling |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
best to just let that connection flow. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Very, very nicely said - 'my ears have heard your laughter and my eyes have seen your face' Can't think of a clearer connection than that !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
JamesBowie~ *L* I have no idea what that means....a little california, but if it has anything to do with sunshine and warmer temps, pleasssseee send them this way, as I am one that lives in a cooolllddd state....thanks for replying I did enjoy it....*S* Sven~sometimes just the flowing is all one needs, thank you my friend...*S* Marge~ thank you for taking the time to read, and for letting me know.....I wish the connection was clear, but sometimes....*sigh* appreciate your words much.......*S* Greeneyes "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* a connection. Yes and to have a strong connection is so desireable. This was wonderful reading. Thank you so much. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I dont want to try and explain where these feeling come from, I want to remember your breathing when I run my fingers down your chest, feel your heart beating when I caress my lips to yours, feel your soul weaving through mine, to remember the colors of your skin when you sleep, hear your whispers in the dark of night when we....just surround my self in your silence and be connected =================== somethings simply dont need explaining very cool poem, well done. well expressed emotions laced with an intensity that defines the connection felt. how nice to see your name here  take care jm I looked into the sky for my anthem The words and music came through But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen Looking into you |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
"I want to remember your breathing when I run my fingers down your chest, feel your heart beating when I caress my lips to yours, feel your soul weaving through mine, to remember the colors of your skin when you sleep, hear your whispers in the dark of night" Your speak My heart - Thank you GE |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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