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Greeneyes
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We are connected though
we dont know how or where
it comes from it just is
We seem so scared sometimes
to let the other see, what we feel,
I left my heart upon the shelf for
so long, that you almost don't seem
real, though my ears have heard your
laughter and my eyes have seen your face

I dont want to try and explain  
where these feeling come from,
I want to remember your breathing
when I run my fingers down your chest, feel
your heart beating when I
caress my lips to yours,
feel your soul weaving
through mine,
to remember the colors
of your skin when you sleep,
hear your whispers in
the dark of night
when we....just
surround my self
in your silence and  
be connected




"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown

© Copyright 2000 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
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a little California, but nice. Just harrasing you a bit, it is good to want to feel connected with someone- and the latter part is hot,whoops...,I mean well written to provoke feeling
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best to just let that connection flow. . .

excellent. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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GreenEyes~
Very, very nicely said -

'my ears have heard your
laughter and my eyes have seen your face'


Can't think of a clearer connection than that !
~*Marge*~


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JamesBowie~ *L*  I have no idea what that means....a little california, but if it has anything to do with sunshine and warmer temps, pleasssseee send them this way, as I am one that lives in a cooolllddd state....thanks for replying I did enjoy it....*S*


Sven~sometimes just the flowing is all one needs, thank you my friend...*S*


Marge~ thank you for taking the time to read, and for letting me know.....I wish the connection was clear, but sometimes....*sigh*
appreciate your words much.......*S*

Greeneyes

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown

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*sigh* a connection. Yes and to have a strong connection is so desireable. This was wonderful reading. Thank you so much. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com

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I dont want to try and explain  
where these feeling come from,
I want to remember your breathing
when I run my fingers down your chest, feel
your heart beating when I
caress my lips to yours,
feel your soul weaving
through mine,
to remember the colors
of your skin when you sleep,
hear your whispers in
the dark of night
when we....just
surround my self
in your silence and  
be connected
===================
somethings simply dont need explaining
very cool poem, well done.
well expressed emotions laced with an intensity that defines the connection felt.
how nice to see your name here  
take care
jm

I looked into the sky for my anthem
The words and music came through
But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen
Looking into you
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"I want to remember your breathing
when I run my fingers down your chest,
feel your heart beating when I
caress my lips to yours,
feel your soul weaving
through mine,
to remember the colors
of your skin when you sleep,
hear your whispers in
the dark of night"

Your speak My heart - Thank you GE
Janet Marie
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