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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2000-12-02 03:43 PM



A Staircase To The Sky

Imagination quarters on high
By the mortar of a sigh.
Brick on thick onto thick on brick
Till it comics by a trick.

Without the usual thunder
The battlement shows wonder
A fantasy with rainbow hue.
In transition to the new.

It's here that we tame the dragons
Without the drain of flagons
And give our hearts the possible
Holding hands with gullible.

Just a touch of fragile dream.
Oasis and an optic gleam
Stalking through the halls of freedom.
A hero and a phantom.

We have all been this magic place
Through imaginations staircase.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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1 posted 2000-12-02 03:56 PM


Just a touch of fragile dream.
Oasis and an optic gleam
Stalking through the halls of freedom.
A hero and a phantom.

We have all been this magic place
Through imaginations staircase
===============

and thru your poetic grace and vision.

Sooo...is it something in the water there???
perhaps ..."COOL-AID" ...  
very cool Sy-babes ...
later-slay those dragons-gator
your ever loving *winkie*


I looked into the sky for my anthem
The words and music came through
But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen
Looking into you

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-12-02 03:57 PM


Sy,
if you keep writing like this you're going to give me a kiniption fit. But it's such a wonderful way to go.
Excellent, sentiment,Excellentflow, excellent all round.Way to go!
write on
Kethry


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau



Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2000-12-02 04:02 PM


chink in brick allows the stream
of gentle slumber, restful dream
and dragon's breath, warm of flame
gently restless, calls my name


how did you get me to do that Sy?


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2000-12-02 10:35 PM


JM,
Thank you winkiewinkie, *L*

Kethry,
Thanks for the read and comment.

Sunshine,
THank you and *L*

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