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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
In and out of time Ever chasing golden dreams One step behind you Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula, this is beautiful, it is so lovely, an excellant write from you love, really great work. Well done, I love this one, I really do. Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Just a perfect Senryu ... I like it so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Well done! Volumes in briefs. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marsha...thank you sweet lady Marge...thank you for saying so...Im finding I like this form very much VAS...sometimes a little is a lot.... Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful ways you can go with this one Paula I really like it so much.....ethome |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Paula? you are just SO good at this. I'm growing quite fond of these...I love the open interpretation you allow, with such soft images...it's like peeking in on your dreams. Wonderful. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
ethome...Im glad you like it...thank you serenity...sigh...it is rather a dream...came just as I was drifting off last night...thank you |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
This sweet piece called "Time" Is truly a precious gem. Always, chase your dreams  This is perfect Paula ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Irie...thank you for the gift of your poetic response... |
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