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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2000-12-02 09:59 AM


The Flowers essence

As the flower gives of glory
And the rainbow lives the sky
So fragile the butterflies story
And its essence where it fly.

Flowers give of glory
Rainbows live the sky
Butterflies their story
Essence where it flies.

Beauty peals petal by petal
In the drama of its sigh
Aging into hardened nettle
As aroma floats on bye.

Petal by petal
Dramas its sigh
To hardened nettle
As aroma floats bye.

Sometimes saved a flora glade
Where the aura never fades.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-12-02 10:21 AM


for the want of a butterfly
forests live...

Excellent Sy...

you give so much...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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2 posted 2000-12-02 10:53 AM


As the flower gives of glory
And the rainbow lives the sky
So fragile the butterflies story
And its essence where it fly.
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Beauty peals petal by petal
In the drama of its sigh
Aging into hardened nettle
As aroma floats on bye.
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Sometimes saved a flora glade
Where the aura never fades.
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your flora and aura are equal to the wind beneath me wings *winkiewinkie*
this is enchanting and beautiful Sweet Sy.
later-meeverlovingstinky-gator  
me


I looked into the sky for my anthem
The words and music came through
But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen
Looking into you

VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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3 posted 2000-12-02 11:11 AM


Wonderful imaging!!  Glad I stopped in to read, ever so glad!
Sven
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4 posted 2000-12-03 02:29 PM


Wonderful Sy. . .

The essence of poetry. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2000-12-03 04:10 PM


Sunshine,
True, *L*

JM,
Winkiewinkie I still remain your stinky.

VAS,
I'm glad too.

Sven,
Nice comment.

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
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Regina SK; Canada
6 posted 2000-12-03 07:41 PM


Hello, a  lovely write.  Such beautiful imagery through your words...enjoyed this muchly.

Poeminister

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