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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2000-12-02 01:38 AM


Ever in my heart
Your words a gift a song shared
And you sing to me

Always on my mind
The music sweet in my soul
Yet you sing to me

Now and forever
A gift a song a treasure
Still you sing to me

© Copyright 2000 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
spiked
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1 posted 2000-12-02 02:10 AM


This is very sweet Paula. Short song for ethomes ears
Rich

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2000-12-02 05:39 AM


Very nice Paula...James
Marsha
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3 posted 2000-12-02 05:42 AM


Paul this is wonderful, I really love this, it is excellant. Really great writing from you.
Take care
               Mushy
                  


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Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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4 posted 2000-12-02 05:51 AM


For ethome? Sweet is a word that should be used twice...he IS a doll, isn't he?
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5 posted 2000-12-02 06:05 AM


First off I have to tell Paula what a simply wonderful piece this is.
Then I have to agree with serenity. ethome is a just a sweet sweet person that writes some beautiful. moving pieces, and his responses make my day.
So thank you both.

Love,
Lady

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


ethome
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6 posted 2000-12-02 07:09 AM


Well! Paula you have knocked me over with this ...thank you so much for such beautiful words!!! and thanks to all who have commented so kindly I feel so complimented!
Janet Marie
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7 posted 2000-12-02 07:20 AM


perfect Paula...lovely gesture....
Ethomes poetry and songs have captured many a poets heart here, as have his warm replies and his obvious love for poetry ...
his friendship has come to be sunshine in my day.
sweet tribute to a sweet man
well done girlie-girl
jm

I looked into the sky for my anthem
The words and music came through
But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen
Looking into you

Sunshine
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8 posted 2000-12-02 07:29 AM


Paula, ethome I can see is quite pleased, and I believe you've given a gift that will be long remembered...



to sing a sweet song
when meaning comes from heart true
a great gift from you


Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Paula Finn
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9 posted 2000-12-02 02:52 PM


Rich...short but sweet yes...thank you

James...thank you my friend

Marsha...LOL well after you calling him such NAMES...Prinny True...hehehe...thank you sweet lady

Serenity...yep for ethome...and sweet doesnt even come close...thanks

Ladycat...yeah he is one special guy...always ready with an encouraging owrd and his poetry is beautiful...thank you

Janet...thanks sweet lady...he deserves this and so much more...

Sunshine...no more than the gifts he gladly gives everyone he replies to and with every poem he gives to Passions...thanks

ethome...LOL well get up sweet poet man...this is no more than you deserve...you have given so much...I just wanted to give you back a little...

Kethry
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10 posted 2000-12-03 01:49 PM


Paula,
This passionate plague is moving like wildfire across this forum. So glad you caught it and so glad you wrote about that sweet huggle bunny first.
Keth


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau



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11 posted 2000-12-03 11:13 PM


Paula~
This is a really nice piece.
He is a man of many songs !
You captured him well in a lovely tribute.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Paula Finn
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12 posted 2000-12-04 03:08 AM


Kethry...he is pretty special...although I dont think I would call him a "sweet huggle bunny"...at least not to his face...HAHAHA...thank you

Marge...thank you...many songs many voices...he is a man of many talents

kaile
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13 posted 2000-12-09 10:56 PM


yes, i appreciate his thoughtful replies and
exercising-rusty-brain-cells poetry  

lovely tribute to a fine poet..

Martie
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14 posted 2000-12-09 11:24 PM


Paula--what a sweet man he is...with a song in his heart...you write a fitting tribute...thank you!
Jaime Fradera
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15 posted 2000-12-12 12:40 PM


hey

[This message has been edited by Jaime Fradera (edited 12-12-2000).]

Paula Finn
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16 posted 2000-12-15 09:11 PM


kaile...yes he does do that now doesnt he hehehe...than you

Martie...well his poetry always sings to me...thank you


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