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No Goodbyes |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I don't want to say goodbye not now, not when I tremble sweet like ripened berries on a vine that fall inviting at your feet Please, don't make me say goodbye nor leave the treasures found in you the wonder, beauty in your eyes that shine with rainbow colored hues To Love in all it's splendored glory I am no stranger, novice~child you added pages to the story that freed my heart, let it run wild... Bitter-sweet, our memories of promised love that cannot be a dream for two amid bright stars washed away upon turbulent seas I don't want to say goodbye though I know now that we must taking with you all I am, my love, my life, my heart, my trust, I don't want to say goodbye... -Tier {R.T.} 3/00 |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, now I have to really cry, you so touched that sad thing inside of me. Wow, it sure is hard to say goodbye, especially when you DON"T WANT TO!! I see you wrote this 9 months ago, how did things turn out? This poem is so beautifullly written, you said all the things I tried to say about a similar situation, but so much better. Peace. Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tiersdin, this is very lovely...we don't want to ever hear you say goodbye...not when you write like this... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Catalinamoon: As it turned out, I had to say goodbye or destroy so much more than my heart. Thank you for commenting, and understanding... Sunshine: I think you are aptly named! What you've written means more than you know.. *smiles & hugs* -Tier |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I don't want to say goodbye not now, not when I tremble sweet like ripened berries on a vine that fall inviting at your feet Please, don't make me say goodbye nor leave the treasures found in you the wonder, beauty in your eyes that shine with rainbow colored hues ================= Tiersdin, this is so poetically pretty.. so lovely in its wording... beautiful imagery lace with bittersweet emotions very well written and expressed take care jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Many years ago I had someone I didn't want to say goodbye to, I couldn't say goodbye, I wouldn't, til at last to survive I found I must...James |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Please, don't make me say goodbye nor leave the treasures found in you the wonder, beauty in your eyes that shine with rainbow colored hues' Beautifully expressed, Tier! With a such a bond, goodbye just doesn't seem possible, does it? Love this! sp  'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TiersDin~ A lovely piece. Sometimes goodbye is said out of necessity - and that makes it sadder yet. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Janet Marie: It's always a pleasure to read your comments. They have such a poetic quality to them. Thank you so much! *smiles* jmlee12345: I do understand what you mean... sometimes, though sad, it is the best thing for those involved... Thank you for commenting... snowpants: *chuckles* {I like that name!} You are so right... it would seem that such a bond would keep two hearts together forever. Honestly, it's because of that mutual love and respect that good-bye was said... Marge Tindal: I couldn't have said it better myself... thank you! *hugs* -Tiers |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Good byes are hard but i think it is the beginning of a fresh start..just have to be strong...and do what you have to do..nicely written...enjoyed..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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