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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-12-01 07:55 PM


                        
                  Until Time Should Cease

      For all eternity until time should cease to be
      I make this vow that your hearts beauty I will see

                                 When the world stops turning and falls apart
                                 I promise you will always hold onto my heart

     When the sun turns black and ice rains down
     I swear that my heart won't wear a frown

                                 When all around me offer their truth as lies
                                 I declare that you wear the truth in your eyes

     When hatred seems to call me its close mate
     I know that with love I can slam shut the gate
                          
                                 When distrust and dishonour crowd all around
                                 I am certain you stop me hiding underground

     When all I touch seems to be tainted with doubt
     I know that your strength I am never without

                                 For if the stars should all disappear from view
                                 I can still see the shining stars when I look at you

     For all you are and for all you can ever say
     I thank you and love for granting me this day

                                 Whenever I leave here and with the angels' rest
                                 I shall feel your love in that home we all love best


                             Marsha



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

© Copyright 2000 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
dgvarner
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1 posted 2000-12-01 08:38 PM


very sweet bubbles  

hugs,g


"so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey

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For all you are and for all you can ever say
     I thank you and love for granting me this day

                                 Whenever I leave here and with the angels' rest
                                 I shall feel your love in that home we all love best

Beautiful sentiments

"Don't wish upon a star...Reach for one!!"

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3 posted 2000-12-01 08:46 PM


Marsha, your thoughts raise your heart to heaven...

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Marsha
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4 posted 2000-12-02 05:55 AM


Dee, thank you love, how's things? I will E you soon I promise. And if I haven't send me a telling off.  
                      
Jeffrey, thank you lots I do appreciate it
                  
Kari, Thank you very muchly. (I know there were a load of them yesterday   )
                         


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-12-02 10:09 AM


Marsha~
What a lovely heartfelt piece.
Very nicely said.
~*Marge*~


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Marsha
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6 posted 2000-12-02 02:29 PM


Marge, thank you very muchly. I really do appreciate you leaving a reply, you know that don't you.
I can write replies to all the other poets here, and they flow from my pen (Well keyboard, but it's the same difference) I just can't seem to reply to my own. I can say thank you, and I do, but then that's it. I think it's because I don't expect any replies at all. (Well yes I do, but only because my friends here like to say hi! ) So although I can enthuse over your work and that of the other Passionate Poets, I can't over mine. This is just an explaination really because I don't think a simple thank you shows how much I appreciate you all, because I truly do. Long live Passions!
                  
Take care
              Mushy
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Paula Finn
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7 posted 2000-12-02 03:15 PM


Thank you is more than enough when you have already gifted us with this kind of beauty
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2000-12-02 03:20 PM


Enjoyed the softness of your message Marsha...James
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9 posted 2000-12-02 04:50 PM


Beautiful, almost sounds like a wedding ceremony.
Sandra

Marsha
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10 posted 2000-12-02 05:20 PM


Paula, thank you love, and you know I truly mean it.   But it's not half as beautiful as the beauty that you gift here.
                          
James thank you very muchly.
                      
Sandra, how are you? I haven't seen you name for a few days, are you okay, I do hope so. Take care of yourself. And thank you, truly.
                

              


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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