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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Gallery Reading Room sing on gentle one for love will come come like the sun when song is done when song is done gently love will come shining like the sun for you lonely one for you lonely one my love will come come with the sun when day is done when day is done in night gentle one my song will come love with the sun --------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* gosh tonight there is such softness and beauty at Passions that my heart melt for the enjoyment I am feasting on. This is beautiful, dear one. Thank you for the sweetest part of my day. Mcuh love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ A brilliant little piece, dear poet. Soft and gently flowing within each stanza. Most original. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I could see myself entering a peaceful room and hearing a song, as I read this one, and knowing that the day was done and a new day would begin. It's an everyday thought but in reading this, it meant something more. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Interloper, thank you. . . Startime, thank you my friend for your words. . . Marge, thank you for reading. . . just a thought today. . . Kathleen, as always, I'm glad that I could sing to you today. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Such a lovely, tender song...well done Sven...this shall probably stay in my head all of this day... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely writing Sven. The lines kind of sing throughout. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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