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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2000-12-01 04:00 PM


oh eternity
where is your comfort for me
in the hands of God< !signature-->

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.



[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 12-02-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Charisma
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1 posted 2000-12-01 04:05 PM


wonderful senryu....and I love it very much.

Charisma

Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-12-01 04:06 PM


Question comes within
asked not in a vain refrain
answered from the soul


Interloper, you knew
this would please all...

thank you.
< !signature-->

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ





[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-01-2000).]

Startime
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3 posted 2000-12-01 04:11 PM


*sigh* how beautiful. How very perfect. Thank you so much. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


Daniel J D
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4 posted 2000-12-01 05:34 PM


Interloper,
Well done, liked it much.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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with you
5 posted 2000-12-01 06:15 PM


This is fantastic   -SEA
Interloper
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6 posted 2000-12-02 12:04 PM


Charisma~
If you loved it, then it served its purpose.

Sunshine~
I hoped.

Startime~
*sigh* and thanks.  High praise indeed.

Daniel~
Thank you my friend.

SEA~
Shux, ma'am, 'twern't nuthin'  


Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


A Whisper's Caress
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7 posted 2000-12-02 12:19 PM


ok I dont know which put a bigger smile on my face,
this beautiful piece or the  "shucks ma'am Twernt nuthin" for Sea

Loved it.


Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

PanDol
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8 posted 2000-12-02 12:21 PM


So wonderfuly true and well written!
What a simple but powerful message Interloper


~PanDol


Interloper
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9 posted 2000-12-02 01:25 PM


AWC~
Thank you.  Glad I "tickled" you  

PanDol~
My first time to hear from you.  Thank you for the read and the kind words.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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10 posted 2000-12-02 01:39 PM


InterLoper~

Such momentous joy
Within His hands to be held
Through eternity



*Very much I enjoyed this.
Thanks for the inspiration.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irie
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11 posted 2000-12-03 03:07 AM


This certainly deserves a
BUMP!
Excellent!  


~Sheri

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left by those who got there first"



ethome
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12 posted 2000-12-03 05:58 AM


Well done indeed!!  thanks for the image!
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13 posted 2000-12-04 11:51 AM


Marge~
A joy for me to have you read my schtuff  

Irie~
My first time to hear from you.  Thanx for the read.

ethome~
Always a pleasure to have you stop by my friend.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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14 posted 2000-12-04 03:17 PM


Stunning in perfection...I truly loved this.
written in that "small, still voice"...

Just a wonder!

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15 posted 2000-12-05 06:08 PM


Serenity~
You take my breath away with your compliments.  Thank you ... thank you  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Sunshine
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16 posted 2000-12-22 08:53 AM


Humm, I'm on vacation...I get to play, and bring back favored gems, such as this...
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