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. . . forget me not
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. . . forget me not |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This wonderful woman was 1500 miles away and I had a hard time with the separation of time and space. You see, I had fallen hard. So, I sent her this verse. If you look closely you will devine her name and the message to her. ================================================== Merry, beautiful eyes that are Intense yet smilingly roguish, Charging in their merriment. Halcyon pools that draw one Ever deeper into their watery depths. Linger too near their sparkle and Ever be slave to their beauty. Fabulous eyes that retain your love 'til given freely to that One very lucky man. Soft and soothingly your look Retains me in its tender Grasp allowing me to share your Eternal warmth, your True friendship, and your life. Many times I have thanked God for Every moment I have been allowed with you, Never asking for more than that; Only hoping, praying for we Two. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such beauty and gentleness in these words. How sad the distance there is. She is a blessed lady, in deed. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Michele is very lucky indeed What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Fortunate are the eyes of Michele when this is read...wonderful acrostic...fine verse... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I found this piece charming, clever, beautiful, and romantic, all wrapped up into one.....terrific piece and thanks for sharing! Nathan |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Could this be more romantic?!  This is a very sweet poem for your lady.......enjoyed this  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Startime~ Thank you for the read. You are gr8. Irish Rose~ I am luckier. Sunshine~ Thanks. She enjoyed it. Nate~ My first time hearing from you. Thanks for dropping by and many thanks for the Kind words. SEA~ Thanks. It was from the heart. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
wow, her name and the title in string poem format, outstanding work here. the piece itself, is beautifully done. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
AWC~ High praise indeed. Many, many thanx Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Loper, I enjoyed this read you write from heart so pure and so I jot this down for you to let ya know I think your writing is cool! Instilled N'eath Touching Each Rhyme Lays Openly Portrayed Endless Rhythm of heartbeat coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-04-2000).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
CocoBaci~ Can One Currently Online with Passions Be A Complete poet In our time? … You can. Signed: I Never doubted That Even Right now. Long have I believed On and enjoyed your wonderful Poetry. Even moreso now, Rather than less. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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